增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧  ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多于的词用斜线（  \  ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2）. 只允许修改10处，多者（ 从第11处起）不计分。

Jim,

    I am pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you some changes in my school.

    You are right. Great changes have been taken place in my school. It is no longer that it used to be three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to tell you two new building have been built and are in use. One of them is a new classroom building, in it there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. Therefore, my school is well equipped about sports facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What's more, we had planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.

I believe my school become better and better, and I hope you will visit my school again.

Yours,

Li Hua

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Ladies and gentlemen,

    It's my honor to give a speech here. After-school activities play a important part in our school life. Proper activities help enrich our lives, broaden our horizons or develop our personalities.

    Mine own experience can serve as a case in point. When I was in Senior One, I become a member of our drama club, that I used to visit on weekends. Since my participation in various activities organizing by the club, I achieved a lot.

    These activities bring me a lot of funs, provide me with good opportunities to develop new friendships and open a window through which I have a brand-new outlook. With so much advantages shown above, why not to join us at once?

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Saturday, I went on journey by train. There were such many passengers that not everyone could get a seat. Many people had to stand, which was really tired. I had a reserved seat so I could sit comfortable. In front of my seat is a woman with two little kids. With the kid squeezing into their single seat, she had to stand up all the way. So I moved a bit but shared my seat with her. The woman felt very grateful to my selflessness. Seeing her beautiful smile, I also smiled. Share increased happiness!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    We are required to collect our smart phones and keep it in the teachers during the weekdays. In fact the most of us obey this regulation, but some still play various trick against it. I'm among those. Once, I hand in a waste phone. Mr. Li, our head teacher, seemed ignore all that. So I felt very luckily to have an extra phone with me. And good times don't last long. "Can I use your phone as a while? I forgot to take mine by chance". Li said, pick out my waste phone and dialing. You can see how embarrassing I was at the scene!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. In no time the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It's true what honesty is more important than money!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    While seating in my chair the other day, I wondered how I could become better person. I knew there was nothing standing in my way in the fact. Therefore, I decided to stop wait for the future to find myself and take action immediately. To begin to find a direction, I try to find my greatest strengths and find out that would bring me joy. I wrote out all my goal, what skills I would need to learn or what steps I would take to achieve them. I believe that I can be very success if I keep trying and work hard.