增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sally,

    Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I've learnt how to get along well with others.

    What's worse, I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can' t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In a word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

Yours,

Li Bing

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I still remember how nervously I was on my first day in the new school three years before. I found it how difficult to follow my teacher in first English class. She spoke in English throughout the class, that was totally different as the lessons I had taken before. In the morning class the next day, my English teacher came to me while she was reading the text aloud. After listen to me for a while, she gave me a big smile and said she like my voice very much. The smile shone on the whole day and for several day. Thanks to the smile, I began to be confident.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起），不计分.

    When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city , but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so , we'll live to regret it .

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Animal bites are like dog and cat bites are most common nowadays. It will cause signs and symptoms such as pain, swelling and bleeding, that bring the victim a lot of suffering. First aid (急救) can make difference before emergency (紧急的) medical help arrives. It can be used for animal bites that cause scratches (挠) on the skin but did not cause a serious reaction. You should do with follows. Firstly, wash the bite area immediate with soap and warm water for 5 minutes. If the bite is deep, place the wound under gently run water for 10 minutes. Then dry the wound with a dean towel. Secondly, if the wound is swollen (肿的), put ice covering in a towel for several minute. Thirdly, get medical care.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I was said that there is a poor countryman, who had nothing but a adult goose. One morning the man went to his goose's nest, and lucky he saw a yellow and glittering egg there.

    He took the eggs home. In his delight, he found that it was an egg of pure gold.

    Every morning the same thing was occurred, and he soon became rich by sell his eggs.

    The countryman became more and more greedy. He wanted get all the gold at once, so he killed the goose. Therefore, when he looked inside, he found nothing in it's body.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一橫线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分

    Everyone should take the action to reduce haze (雾霾), which is harmless to our health. First of all, I believe that if we plant more tree, there will be less haze in their city. Trees can absorb exhaust fumes (尾气) from cars, thus reduce pollution. Second, the government should punish the factories where produce too many fumes. Exhaust fumes is the main cause of haze and do greatly harm to people's health. Maybe we can move factories to areas where few people live. Third, I think it was a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation. Last but not least, we can call on citizens ride bikes if they travel short journeys.