假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（  ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（    ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'd like tell you something about your life in this boarding school. I stay in a dormitory with three other girls, all of them are kind and nice. We get on well to others and have become good friends. Living in a boarding school make me independent. I am confident to take care of myself, wash the clothes, and clean the rooms, that I never did when at home. The classes here are very interested and challenging. I'm still feeling a little dissatisfied with some other thing. The living conditions are not as good as it at home and the chance to get in touch with the outside world is limited. Anyway, I'II get used to living here and hope everything will be more better soon.

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1)．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2)．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Yesterday my English teacher asked each student write a composition title "The Greatest Achievement of My Life". I was not sure how to write about it. I've thought it over for a long time. I do many things. Coming to America, get a job and meeting new people was my achievements. I think my greatest achievement is learning English. Though sometime I don't understand everything people are saying, but each day I get better and better. I told my teacher this was difficult composition to write. Above all, it is hard to measure everything you have done.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

    Almost 90% of the most popular video games contain violence,many of them are extremely violent.

    When we will finish translating the book depend on how much time we have every day.

    She married to a man she didn't love at all.

    As is known to us is that English is being accepted as an international language.

    The reason why he didn't pass the exam was because he was too careless.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I have two fathers, a rich one and a poor one. One is high educated and intelligent, who completed four years of undergraduate work in less than two years. He them went on Stanford University. The other father never finishes the eighth grade. Therefore, both men are successful in their careers, work hard all their lives. Yet one struggles financially all his life. The other becomes one of the richest men in the Hawaii. And they have very different point of view about the subject of money. The contrast in our points of view is so extreme that we grow puzzling sometimes. I have to spend periods of time figuring out how each is saying.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Among different kind of sports, swimming is my favorite. It was a very excited experience to learn swimming with my parents when I am five years old.

Swimming is a real good sport. It makes me feeling relaxed. This sport can make me stay health and strong, so I exercise almost every part of my body every time I go swimming.

    Before going to swim, we should pay attention three points. The first is to make your body in a better state. The second is that you shouldn't eat too many. The last is that you'd better swim with some friends. These can help you stay safe and enjoy ourselves.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In my school, we have our own talent show every year, that has been a tradition for 15 years. This year, our school was held one as scheduled. A great many students took active part in it. I decided to play the violin with a partner naming Julia, who played the piano along for me. We had practiced many time before the talent show started.

    Everyone watched the show excited. Julia and I did a good job. Others students sang and danced happily. The talent show helped us relax but enriched our school life. We all enjoyed them very much.