注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything but could make decisions by myself. Besides, my parents didn't seem to think so. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on their own, but I still want to have my parents to turn whenever I need help.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(_^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    It was beautiful morning. I stepped outside from my apartment after breakfast. I saw two kids were watching people passing silent. Later I knew that they were there because sometimes people give him money or food on such cold weather. I told them to stay there and go back into my apartment, packed some food or gave it to them. Filling with great joy, they started eating quickly. I also gave them several bag of biscuits. They thanked to me again and again. I was happy I could give them some food, which could at least give them a few strength.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I have received and read your letter, in which you mention that you wanted to lose weight by diet.

    It is only naturally that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion, healthy is more important than beauty. For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is second. So do not let others' opinions to affect your normal life. Therefore, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits. The most important thing is how you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with our studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.

    I hope my advices will be helpful to you and I'm looking forward to your next letter.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

    I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was a toy what I'd always wanted on particular. I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or face my cousin again; I would always know I'd done something wrong. Late, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Laughing is one of life's most simple pleasure. It is free. You can do it anywhere. Like the flu, laughter can spread easy among people. Often when we hear someone laughing in crowded room or a packed train , we start laughing too—even if we have no idea how.

    In fact, mental health can affect on physical health. Therefore, "Laughter is the best medicine" does not mean that I should not take medicine when you're sick. It simply means that have a positive outlook might help ease your troubles but make you cheerful. Besides, making others laugh with you is also an act what is joyful and kind.