增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

    Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit for it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river. It's such beautiful a place! We can hear birds singing happy all round. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have a lot of spare time to visit the area or have fun. I am sure it will be a unforgettable experience. If you have an interest in it, write to me soon

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One day when I was at four, I played outside in the courtyard. I caught sight my dad's truck and thought he shouldn't have to drive such a ugly truck. Then I spot a tin of white paint. I picked up a brush and started painting white dot all over the truck. I was on the roof busy doing the job while my dad walked up, looked at me in surprise. Before I explained anything, he said cheerful, “Angela, that's the pretty truck I've ever seen!” He could have blamed me. But he didn't. Therefore, he lifted my little soul with those encouraging words.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Wang Mei,

    I'm sorry to hear about your problem. Don't be too concerning about it. Now I'd like to give you some advices. Firstly, you may have the heart-to-heart talk with your roommates. Perhaps they will realize their mistakes or correct them. Secondly, if you find hard to have a good talk with them, you may write a letter about them. Lastly, if these ways don't work, you'd better to report it to your teacher, whom will help solve the problem. Good communication is the key to deal with the relationship with others. Maybe someday you will become good friends. I hope my suggestions will be of greatly help to you.

Best wishes!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My cousin, Daniel, is the most success person I know, even though he has had many difficulties on his road to achieve success. His parents died in a accident when he was 17. Daniel needed to take care of his two younger brother, so he left school and found a job at a supermarket. At night, he helped them about homework and did all the housework. Daniel was also a very good worker. His boss was decided to help him go to college. It takes Daniel eight years, but finally he finished. Now Daniel plans attend a business management course and start his own business three years late. Daniel has a dream, but he is working hard to achieve it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It's easy for you to start smoking. But if you become addicted to it, you may find it difficult give it up. First of all, you may become physically addicted to nicotine, that is in cigarettes. Secondly, you may develop into the habit of smoking and finally become mental addicted to it. Smoking may have all kind of harmful effects on the fitness of smokers and non-smokers around them. Not only does it affect your physical fitness, but also do damage to your heart and lungs, cause a variety of diseases. If you are a smoker, the bad smell may drive people around you away. However, it is important that you should quit smoking and live a health life. You can make the list of all the benefits you may get.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Friday, our class pay a visit to Beijing Planning Exhibition Hall, where started with a warm welcome from a guide at the entrance. Once inside, we attracted to an exhibition that gave a vividly account of Beijing's history. To my excitements, on a huge map I could even find what my local area was liked years ago. In a movie called Beautiful Beijing, we learned how Beijing became a modern city. Afterwards, we went to a urban planning model which impressed them most. After leaving, I left for a message on the board, expressing my best wishes to my hometown.