增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Mr. Smith offers us some advice on how to write a good composition, which include the following steps.

    Firstly, we should read the topic careful and organize our ideas. then we start to shape our thoughts in our own words and finish our writing in the giving time. Before that, we have to check our compositions, paying attention to grammar and spelling. It is very important to read them aloud to myself or someone else from beginning to end. Lastly, we had better to ask our teachers or classmates for advice on why to improve our writing. If possibly, we may leave them alone for some time before reading again, it will help a great deal.

    I hope you will benefit the advice above a lot.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其右面的横线上写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，并在其右面的横线上写出多余的词，并用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词右面横线上面写出修改后的词。

注意：每句只有一处错误，多改不计分。

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Dear Joy.

    How are you doing? Here is an exciting news for you. There will be an invention competition in our school in the 20th of October. However, there is a rule the participants shall be in a group. But I'd like to invite you to be my partners.

    I know that you have been longed to design a tiny cooler that people can wear around the wrist. I think it will be a wonderfully idea for the competition. We can make a small air conditioner to controlling the temperature of the wearer.

    How do you think of my suggestion? Looking forward to you reply.

Yours,

Zhang Xin

增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Every morning John goes to work by trains. He always buys a piece of newspaper, which help to make the time pass quickly. One Thursday morning, he turns to the sports page. He wanted to reading the news about an important football match the night ago. The news was such interesting that he forgot to get off at his station. He didn't know it when he saw the sea. He got off at the next station, and had to wait long time for a train to return back. Of course, he arrived very late at the office.  His boss was very angry when John told him why she was late. “Work is more important than football”, he shouted loudly.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误仅限1词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I am good at all the subjects, and always ready help others. At school I get along well with my classmates. Therefore, I have a problem that troubles myself all the time. It's the relationship among my desk mate and me. He is a hard-working student, who keeps school rule well. But he's a person with few words. What's more, he got angry easily. I don't know what to deal with him. Maybe that's why we've seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughts. I value our friendship. I hope we can know more about with each other and understand each other better. I do hope we will be close to each other than before.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mary,

    I'm writing to tell you anything about my school. Xinhua Middle School in which I am studied is wonderful! Look at a picture here. This is the gate of our school. The campus of the school is also very beautiful. I will never forget the day that I arrived. The teachers and the schoolmates were so friendly for me that I felt at home right away. Now I'm happily here. The teachers are all kind, patience and energetic. I'm getting well with my classmates. Next time I will send to you another postcard of your teaching building where I will study for three years.

Yours,

Li Hua