增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I will share one experience with you. With the college Entrance Examination draw near, I was filled with great anxiety. However, I couldn't be absorbed in study, resulting from my failing in the examination. I got very discouraging. Just then, my teacher, Miss Zhang, approached me and said, “In life we all have moments when we can't achieve what we want to. It is natural. Don't allow those moments to weaken you, and turn them into motivation to inspire yourself.” Her words were reminder that provided me with constant encouragement to smile at life. Consequently, I gained that I deserved.

    So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jim,

    I'm very glad to hear from you. In your letter, you said you suffer from depression because of the heavy load of study and didn't know what to get rid of it. Therefore, I am writing to offer you some suggestion.

    First of all, it is quite common of high school students to feel depressed sometimes. What really matters is you should face your problem and make up your mind to settle it. The most effectively way is to turn to your teachers for help. He will surely provide you with a useful and practical advice. Besides, take an active part in sports or you'll feel more energetic than before. Hang out with friends is also a good way to relax yourself.

    I hope my suggestions can be of some help to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Friday I saw the worst weather in years. In the morning, the sun was completely blocked so that I could see something clearly. I stayed at home, look outside. That came into sight was a flash of lightning. Seconds later, the noise of thunder broke the silent. Then a strong wind starts to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk was blown high into the air and some flew out the open window. Then I closed the window when it rained hard and near broke my window.

    What a bad weather! I hate it so I can't go out to play.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Li Bai was a great poet in the Tang Dynasty of China. It's said that in his childhood, he was very fond playing and afraid of difficulties, and made no effort in her studies. one day, in his way home after school, he walked by a creek and saw the old woman grinding a very, very thick iron rod. Being curious, he went to the old woman and ask, "Old grandma, why are you grinding this iron rod?" The old woman replied, "To making a needle." At this moment, Li Bai feel more curious and asked again, "How can you grind such a thick iron rod that into a needle?" "Yes. I can. I certainly can," the old woman said. "If one works with constantly efforts, one can grind an iron rod into a needle." Hearing how the old woman said, Li Bai was enlightened. Since then, Li Bai studied hard and made rapid progresses. Eventually he became a famous poet.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In order to leave some fun memories for all of us before graduation, our class made the special video to express our appreciation to our school. We carried out a heat discussion about what to design the video. We were gathered a lot of interesting ideas, but then began to make the video. We shoot some fun clips in our campus and interviewed some of your teachers. After that, we asked some computer experts help us edit the video. The video received a warm welcome to our classmates. Many great memories of our times at school flooded into our minds when we watched it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Brown,

    Last summer I take a part­time job in the International Camp for children. I have been told one more worker will needed this year and I think you are fit to it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day so they will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.