增加；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改；在错的词下划一满线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir，

    Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school. As for your choice between the two courses,   prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more time to do sora traveling and make a few mw friends. Of all the subject I'm teaming at school, I like English best. I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly, So I real hope to take this chance to improve it. If possible, I'd like to slay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can knew some customs  in England- what I'm particularly interested in,I believe I will have wonderful time this summer.

YouR truly,

Grace

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

刪除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线。并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

②只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last weekend, my classmate and I went on a camping trip near the river. It was not long distance, so we chose to get here by bike.

    We started with early in the morning. On the way, we talked about that we saw around. It takes about half an hour to get to the place. On arriving, some girls sat down, had her breakfast and listened to the birds sings. Some admired the river while others drew pictures. My friends and I found a quietly place and went fishing. To our surprise, we got much fishes.

Time passed so quickly and we had to say goodbye. I enjoyed the pleasant or exciting trip.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very crowded and I had to stand. Besides me there was a woman held a little boy in her arms. In front of her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be sleep. I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What's wrong with the uncle?” I had thought that perhaps the woman would blame the man. Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with a smile, “Be quiet. This uncle must very tired because of hard work.” The young man must have heard the word. His face turned red and offered one seat for the woman at once.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last summer holiday, I paid visit to Hong Kong with my father. To their surprise, we found the streets were not as wide as those in our city. The bus and cars were running very fast. The sidewalks were always crowding because many visitors went there every day. The people there were friendly, and when we were asked them for help, they were willing to help us. We take many photos there and then we shared them on WeChat Moments（朋友圈）. We also bought some gifts there for much things were sold for a discount. It's so hardly to say goodbye to Hong Kong. We hope to go there once more unless we have chances.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last summer vacation, I went to Beijing to seeing my grandfather. He told me that he had dreamed of visiting Shanghai, where he brought up by his uncle. Hearing this, I decide to go there with him.

    I checked the weather in Shanghai and booked the air ticket on the internet as well. After that, I helped him prepare all the things he might need them during the trip, such as his identity card, a camera, or a mobile phone. Three days ago, my grandfather and I headed to the airport and my parents went to see us off.

    Busy as it was, I felt proudly because I could do everything for my grandfather.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

Dear Tom,

    How is it going? Knowing that you are interesting in Chinese calligraphy, I'm writing to tell you it's my pleasure to help you learn them.

    As I have been practicing it for many years, I have much valuable experience and know exact what you need for calligraphy. So I will prepare some tool that are of great use for you, like the writing brush, ink and paper, that are necessary for practicing calligraphy. As you know, I had piano lessons from Monday to Sunday. I will be free on Sunday afternoon. Thus, you can come to my home at 2:00p. m. on every Sunday if it is convenient for you.

    I' m sure that by learn Chinese calligraphy, you will have a good understanding of Chinese culture than ever before. I'm looking forward your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua