假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

 注意：1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

 2）. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    This morning, I got an email from the library. It said the book I reserved was ready to be picking up. Because I had always been waiting to read it, so at that moment I was very exciting. Outside the library, I saw the man driving around the small parking lot, try to find a parking space. He head for the disabled parking space, the only one that was free. He got off his car with a pile of library book to return. Seeing that, I offered to return them to him. He thanked me and jumped quick in his car and drove off, keeping the disabled parking space free for someone needed it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Life is full of various experiences, of them some are unforgettable. I still remember the hiking experience with my classmates for 16 km a year later. That summer day, we set off early in the morning, think it would be great fun to walk for so long a distance. However, with the weather is getting hotter and hotter, I found their legs heavier and heavier. What's worse, my feet began bleeding because long time pressing against the shoes. At one point, I even wanted to give in. But I managed to drag the rest of the way to the destination.

    Though not pleasant, this journey was impressive or rewarding. I learnt that life is the long journey like this. No matter what happened, we should never give up, and we will finally achieve what we want to.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Dear Ms Smith,

    I am Li Hua. I am writing to ask a several-hour leave. I was to give a speech to welcome a group of American visiting teachers on Wednesday morning. I am terrible sorry to tell you that I can't come to attend at your class. How a pity! Perspectives on American Literature are always my favourite course. I do hope you can excuse my absence. As to the lessons to be missing, I wonder if it is possible for them to be recorded so that I can listen to it later. Or I will just read my classmate's notes and making them up as soon as possible.

    Your permit will be appreciated. Thanks a lot !

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. Thirty minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I'll think of this experience.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last summer, I got a young pet dog. I named him with Max after my favorite toy robot. The next day, I called her like this: “Come here, Max!” Then he comes up to me. I told him to getting on the bed. Strange, he went to the bathroom. Although it was very hot, I thought that Max wanted to go for swim, so I put him into a pool. To my surprises, he enjoyed himself very much in the water. Now Max has grown more bigger and follows me no matter where I go. He had brought me a lot of happiness.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限1词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Steven,

    From your letter, I know it is hard for you to make friends. The following advice may be for some help to you.

    To begin with, walking to your classmates and talk with them. After several talk you will happy find that they ate likely to consider you as a warm-heart person. Gradually, you will enjoy each other company. Besides, you'd better to give them a hand when they are in trouble. It is advisable to participate in different kind of activities, which you can communicate with different people.

    All in all if you follow my advice above, you would find that it isn't big deal to make some friends.

Yours,

Jack