增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．）处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Laura,

    Thanks for let us stay at your seaside house. Now, you might have heard from your neighbors about which happened on Saturday evening. When I was out a walk, my younger son, Tom, was playing the football before your house. He made so much noise that the neighbors got quite angrily. Even worse, Tom broke one of the window of Mr. Wilson's house. Tom and I apologized to all the neighbors for the unhappy happenings, but promised to have the broken window repair soon. Tom said that we would not do such silly things any more. I am glad that your neighbors had forgiven us. They are really nice people.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I have always been showing great interest in sports. When I saw some people snowboarding, I decided to give it try. Therefore, it was much more difficult than had expected. At first I found why I could not keep my balances on a board easily. And it seemed almost possibly for me to go any distance without falling. I hated to fail in any sport, so I continued to try and finally manage to go all the way up a slope (斜坡) without an accident. It was then when I realized what a great sport it was. Now I'd rather going snowboarding regularly.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在符号下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在加词符号下写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（＼）在原句中划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在原句下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每句只有一处错误，多改不计分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I brought up by my grandmother. She was one of the people that I loved them most. I didn't know what to pay her back except spending more time on her. My grand-mother had a poor memory. One Sunday, we took a walk in the park. When her neighbor greeted her, she just stared at them, unable to recognize who they are. It made me feel quite sadly. It was like take a little child for a walk. But that day I enjoyed our walking as I held her hand. That was a last walk we ever took together in the park before she was taken to hospital. Less than a year late, she was gone.