注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一；

2．只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分。

Kate was always unhappy about her figure, but she didn't know how to lose the weight. One day, she went to consulting a doctor. The doctor advised her to have a balancing diet and exercise more. So her parents were both busy earning their living and couldn't provide Kate a healthy diet. She often ate fast food who contained too much fat. She knew she ought to eat more vegetables and fruit that were good for her healthy. Luckily, two weeks late, with the help of the doctor, Kate become thinner. He was very happy and became more confidence about herself.

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删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Have you ever been to Wuzhen? It is so beautiful a village that I had already visited it many times. Locating in Jiaxing, Zhejiang Province, it has a history of about 6,000 years. Wuzhen is a small town in the southern area, where has a lot of small bridges going through clean streams. Local people live in old houses, but they are very friendly. During the day, you can walk or sit on a boat to enjoying the natural scenery along the stream. The scene at night is quite attractively as well. There are all kinds of round and square light. Every time when I look at the pictures which I took, I will clearly remember the water, the bridges and the houses. I love amazing water country!

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删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living habit，which do great harm to their health．

    As we all know it, health is more important than wealth．Without a healthy body，you cannot do everything even if you are a millionaire．In order keep healthy，it's necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones．

    First of all，eat a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day．You should eat more fruit and vegetables，which are rich of vitamins．Secondly，getting enough sleep．Early to bed and early to rise make you feel great all day long．Lastly，take exercise every day to make your body strong．

    As long as you form health habits and keep them，you'll have a strong body and live the healthy life．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir,

    I'm writing to offer some advices on our winter travel. In my opinion, a one-week trip to a countryside can't be good. The fresh air and various activities will guarantee us a healthy life here.

    We may go by bike to enjoy the landscape. During the trip, we can arrange some activities, from what we will benefit a lot, such as playing snowballs, building a snowman, going skating and climb a mountain. We can even invite the local students join us, not only to improve their English but also to deepen their understanding of the countryside. I am confident to establish friendship and harvest happy from this trip.

    I would appreciate it that if you could take my plan into consideration.

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删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    With the summer vacation is drawing near, my classmates are all trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home except me. I have a different plan for the upcoming vacation. I have made up my mind to spend the first two weeks of the vacation travel alone in Sichuan and Guizhou and then work part-time in the city centre library for rest of the vacation. Since I won't go home, my parents are going to visit myself on campus. When they coming here, I will show them around my university and the city as well. I am thinking of buying them some nice gifts, it will be a big surprising for them. My parents mean a lot to me. I think it is high time that I do something special to express my thanks to them for that they have done for me.

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删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Editor,

    I'm the only daughter of my parents. So they worried about everything I do. For example, when I ride my bike, my parents won't let me ride by myself. They are afraid of I might fall off my bike and hurt myself. Instead, they are taking great trouble to support a bike, with my mother even carrying a first-aid box. I'm not free to ride and I often say angry, 'Why not let me ride alone?' Now, most family have one child. Parents want to do everything for his children. This does no good on them. Too much love from parents may prevent children from become independent. In my opinion, parents should let their children do that they should do alone.

Yours,

Alice