增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的间用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I took the Harvard Summer School program in my vacation. During my stay there, I spend a lot of time studying in the main library Widener. I enjoyed myself in the ocean of knowledges, either doing research for my papers or read special edition books. The library, which it is named after its donor Harry Widener, stands right next to the Emerson building of philosophy. Opening a pair of heavy yet elegant metal doors, I was immediate bathed in warm light. I wandered around the library, fascinating to find one treasure after other.

    The library is a amazing place. One can fully experience the academic atmosphere only he visits the library. For me, the library as well as the courses explain Harvard's place as the home of devoted scholars.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

3). 不按要求格式改错不得分。

例如:

    It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was completely free then, so I'll the am to say “yes”. I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m. in Friday evening.On this morning I got up early and went to school as usually, only to find there were nobody in the classroom because it is Sunday. “How a bad memory I have!” I couldn't help laughing. Stand in front of the school gate, I began to wonder what to do next. Suddenly a good idea occurs to me. “Why not get together with some good friends for a picnic in such a fine weather?” I immediately telephoned some of my best friends, but they all agreed to join me. About two hours late, we finally arrived a pleasant park with trees and flowers here and there. We really enjoyed us greatly.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。

修改：在所需修改的词下面划横线，并写出修改后的词。

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.

修改： 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.

    Many a student who wants to study abroad after high school dream of living in a fancy house. One approach to find accommodation（住所） is by applying to a dormitory through your school's official website. The other is by searching rental advertisements. Once you've found a place that interests you, there are many map applications, that can help you get an idea of the area.

    During my stay in Sydney, I chose to rent a house. I moved four time in those two years. Their first place was a double room in a brand﹣new house having found on the internet. Since it was located closely to the university, the price was much higher as expected. In Australia, rent is paid on weekly basis, and you must pay four weeks of rent as a deposit（押金） when you move in. That was quite a financial burden.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir,

    I've learned a teaching assistant for foreign teachers is wanted in your school. I'm writing to apply to the position.

    First of all, I had graduated from Anhui University one month ago. Having exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate with others in fluently English, What's more, years of experiences of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, who will help a lot to keep the class in order. The most important factor is that I love kids, and I'm confident of my patience and care will undoubtedly, win his trust.

    All in all, I think my enthusiasm and full sense of responsibility will make me a qualifying teaching assistant. I'd appreciate you if you could take my application into consideration.

    Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hun