增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm sorry to hear that you're having trouble get along with your friends.Here is my advices.First,talk with your friends often.It is the good idea to share your happiness and sadness to them.Second,helping each other was very important.It's better for you to help your friends have trouble in study or daily life.And they will be help you when you need help.Third,learn to appreciate your friends' strengths.In this way,you can make really friends.Whether you follow my suggestions,I believe your friends will understand them better.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One day I went with my dad to a store near our home. Just inside the door stood the most beautiful bicycle I have ever seen. No other kids in our town rode one like it. My dad must have noticed it. Bend down, he asked if I liked the bicycle, who price was a little high. I nodded. To my surprise, he bought it without any hesitate. I felt quite excitedly.

    Later, my father shared with me his experiences of those of his school day. My grandparents had no money for even such the thing as a pencil, and he never dared to ask my grandpa for one. Tears filled with Dad's eyes whatever he recalled his childhood. He said he would do his best get his child what he wanted.

增加、删除或修改。

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线（）,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last night I was preparing for the coming examination while the noise from my neighbor interrupts me. The noise went on and on. It was so loud that I could hard pay attention to my study any longer. So I went to my neighbor's house but said to him: “Excuse me, would you please turn down the TV? I'm preparing for tomorrow's exam.” When he heard these word, his face went the red. And he said, “I'm sorry to have made so much noise. Just now, the football game was very wonderful. I'm too exciting to control me. I won't do that again. Good lucky in your coming exam.” After that, I got down my study.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Why is it necessary for us to learn English? This is a good question. First, learning English allows me make more friends. Having more friends mean more ways. Second, with a good command of English, I can travel around the world more easy. The world is such big that I want to have a look. Last, learning English can be help me open the door for another culture. It's of great important to have a better understanding about the culture, that is related to English learning.

    Because of that is mentioned above, I must try my best to learn English well.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I brought up by my grandmother. She was one of the people that I loved them most. I didn't know what to pay her back except spending more time on her. My grand-mother had a poor memory. One Sunday, we took a walk in the park. When her neighbor greeted her, she just stared at them, unable to recognize who they are. It made me feel quite sadly. It was like take a little child for a walk. But that day I enjoyed our walking as I held her hand. That was a last walk we ever took together in the park before she was taken to hospital. Less than a year late, she was gone.