假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

删除：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear David,

    Long time no see! I miss you very much.

 I'm writing to express my thank for your help during the seven-day summer camp. I have made a great progress in my English by communicating to you. What is more, while visit some tourist attractions, you volunteer to be my guide and showed me a lot of American culture, it has broadened my horizons. Not only have I learn a lot about American culture, but also I have made good American friends. It was really a wonderful experience!

     By the way, would you like to join the summer camp in China the next year? I'd like to your guide and you can experience any Chinese culture and customs. I am sure you will have a great time.

    I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely.

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It's unbelievable when I heard my name calling.I was chosen to play the leading role in the play,and it was my dream.I used to being too shy to speak in a public.But my parents and teachers always encourage me to do so.Now I have changed great.In class,I am often the first one to stand up and answer questions ever if I may make much mistakes.No pains,no gains.Now I am always brave enough to overcome the difficulty in her heart,and have became a lively girl.My experience shows that we should not be afraid losing face,and only in this way can we make progresses.

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Yang Li, a five-year-old girl living next door to me, very clever. Because she is not old enough to go to the school, she often asks me to teach herself to read, write and draw. She studies hardly and soon she learns a lot. One evening last month I was doing my English homeworks when she came to my house. She asked me how I learned English. “You would find English a bridge for so much knowledge,” I said. She then wanted to learn English, either. She has learned many English words so far but her parents are very grateful to me.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Mr. Smith had a 8-year-old son named Tony, who enjoyed listen to music very much. So he bought a piano to Tony, hoping that he could become a famous pianist one day. The little boy put her heart into practising the piano day after day and seems to enjoy every minute of it. Therefore, half a year later, he told his father that he was tired practising the piano. Hear this, Mr. Smith said, “Tony, it is one thing to be fond of listening to music, but it is another thing to perform good by yourself. You can never play the piano well even if you don't practise more.”

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1）每句不超过两个错误；

2）每处错误及其修改均限一词；

3）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I learn so many at school. I studied a lot of different subjects. There are many interested activities, too. I really enjoy taking part art activities such as music and dance. I also get the chance to doing sports and play games on the sports ground. I am a member of the school's volleyball team. Their teachers teach us with a great deal of cares and patience. As a result, we make a great progress. And gradual, we have more confidence in ourselves. In my class I have many good friends. We study, play but eat together. I love my school very much.