增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词。

  删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

  修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir/Madam,

    I'm one of your customer, I ordered a set of books on your website two weeks ago, but I didn't received it until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were too poorly packed up that the cover of one book were torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missed.

    I'm sorry to have received such poorly service, and I believe I have every right ask you to deal with this problem. I hope you either return my money back or deliver a new set of books to me. Beside, I'd like to be informed of the process of your deal with my complaint.

    I'm looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last week, my friends and me went to watch Jay Chou's performance in Guangzhou. There are crowds of cheerful fans there, many of who came from other cities. Jay began his performance with one of his most famous song. We all cheered and shouted out his name, but some even cried with joy. When Jay began to sing the seventh song it called Sunny Day, it started to rain. Therefore, the concert was not interrupted and we got even more exciting in the rain. At last, Jay finished the concert with a speech, thank his fans for always supporting him. What memorable experience!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    When the dog named Judy spot the first sheep in her life, she set off racing after the sheep across several fields, but fell off cliff. His owner Mike panicked and called the police, who turned up in second. Six volunteers slid down the cliff under the help of a rope but didn't find Judy. For the next two weeks, Mike was felt heartbroken. Then, one day, the phone rang but the police said they had found her at chance. The dog had initially lain unconsciously, but survived by drinking fresh water. "It was because of a plentiful supply of water which the lucky dog survived." The police added.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⑴每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⑵只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Do you believe love is the most important? In the early twenty century, homeless people were often brought up in orphanages, in that they received little love. At one time, Dr. Skeels took twelve children from an art orphanage or had a young girl look them each day. He also studied another twelve children who are left in the orphanage all day long. He followed these children not until they grew up, and the results were shocked. The children staying all day in the orphanage were either dead or suffering from serious illnesses. However, the twelve children loved by the girl were all healthy and independently. The only difference between the life of these children ­ the love, made a great difference to us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today was my father's birthday, so I decided to bake a cake for him. I didn't know how make a cake. I couldn't tell my father because of I wanted to give him a surprise. It was my firstly attempt, so I searched on the Internet and found much videos there. I choose the best one. I saw the full videos and started baking. First I collected all the things which might be needed to bake a cake. And then, I followed the steps and finally my cake was ready. Last, I decorated the cake by chocolates so that it looked more delicious. Then I gave the cake to his father and he was really surprising.