增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改： 在错词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I've learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for receptionist (接待员). I'm very interesting in the job and I'd like to apply to the job.

    First of all, allow me to introduce myself. I had just graduated from senior high school and taken the College Entrance Examination. I want to find out a part-time job in summer. I'm 18 year old and have a good knowledge of English, especial in terms of speaking and listening. In fact, I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school. Besides, I'm quite easy-going but therefore very popular among my classmates.

I sincerely hope you can give us a chance. I'm looking forward to your early reply.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Thursday we go to Mianshan Mountain for our autumn outing. We got the foot of the mountain at 9 am. Following the long path, they began to climb. After some time, we were all tiring. We had a very shortly rest and moved on. At last, we succeeded in getting to the top, on which we kept laughing and jump .It was seemed that we were the happiest people in the world. We took some photo there, and then sat down but had something to eat. At 3 pm, we began to go down. It was a interesting and unforgettable day and all of us wished the autumn of our country would be with us forever.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I can still clear remember I was once asked to make the speech before the whole class. You can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eye fixed to me. I had no choice but prepare for it, though. The most hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory. The real moment began when I stood on the platform with my legs trembled and my mind blank. So my listeners were waiting patiently. Gradually, 1 found me back, giving my speech at last. Then I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of speaking before the audience had disappeared. Actually, now I've become a great speaker!

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Apologizing can be harder than realizing you've acted poor. To truly apologize to a friend, you had to be sincere and let your friend to know how much he means to you. It's easy said than done. But if you swallow your pride and show some sincere regret, they will have a true apology ready. Besides, sending gifts can be good choice for you to make. And if you do this kind of thing instead of talk to your friend face to face, you're just hiding behind gifts. After all, gifts cannot say word like "I'm sorry". So it is of great important to apologize in person.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在横线下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fit in at your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestion may be helpful.

    First, I thought you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possibly. With this way, you will get to know each other better. Second, it might be an good idea for you to take part in more activities, that usually involve in team-work and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships. Lastly, facing with some tough problems, you might consider asking your teachers, who can usually offer him some sensible suggestions.

    I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is anything more I can do help, please let me know.