Dear Mary,

    I receive your E-mail just now. Don't worry about me. I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests. I'm afraid I couldn't agree with you. I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I' m looking forward to hearing good news from you.

Yours

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    One evening two German were walking in the street together. They tried to find a chance steal something. The clock struck 12. Most of the people had going to bed. Quietly they came to a house. There were no lights in the house but it seemed that everyone in the house were asleep. Standing at the front gate, one said in German to the another, “You wait here. I'll go around to the back door and then get into the house...” Suddenly out of the house ran a dog. The two men were frightening and ran away as fast as they can. They dared not to stop until they got to a lonely place “I hadn't expected dog could understand German,” one man said.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Mr. Zhang, our English teacher, telling us that the ability to write in English is becoming increasingly important in English communication as well as in examinations. Therefore, it was worth focusing our attention.

    In order to write the good essay, we should have an excellently command of over 2,000 frequently- used English words. It's necessary and useful for us to read or even recite beautiful English articles which we can leam useful structures of sentence. As we all know, that practice makes perfect, so you should take every possible chance to write in English.

    According to my personal experience, keep a diary every day is a good means to achieve the aim.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student at a ordinary school. Although I felt disappointed at the shabby campus and my poorly－equipped classroom, but I found the teachers impatient and considerate. Beside, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decide to make the best it. I worked hard and got along good with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available, Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, that greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who we are.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack,

    I'm sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make friends. Now, I'd like to offer you any advice.

    Firstly, it's normal for you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment. Secondly, you should greet your classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly, it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities, what can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you're friendly to the others.

    I hope the suggestion above will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you for the future.

Yours

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Dr. Fang,

    I read your magazines every month. I myself is a teenager, almost 16, and have some problem at home and I hope you can help me. The mainly problem is that I can't get along my father. Whenever I want to do something or suggest an idea, he didn't listen to me. Then, when I refuse to listen to her, my father shouts at me angrily. He and my mother always make me to do things I don't like, such as playing the piano and do housework. How should I do?

Yours,

Li Hua