增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

①The function of smile is to show happiness and put people to ease.

②It is hard work as well as determination that have made him achieve everything he wanted.

③The actors in Disneyland brought much fun to the visitors, made them laugh happily.

④The boy's dream to take a trip to England has been come true.

⑤Body language makes possible for us to understand others better.

⑥Today most people around the world are more like to greet each other by shaking hands.

⑦To our great amuse, the kids performed on the stage in a funny way.

⑧News came from the school office which Fang Jianxun had been admitted to Tsinghua University．

⑨The detective novel is a attraction for me.

⑩Some parks are famous for traditional culture, other for showing the unique sights.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。:

    My first stay at home alone was very memorable. One day when I was twelve, both my mother and father were away on the business and I had to be all with my self for two days. My parents left early the first day, I got up soon after they left. The first evening I was a little scare, so I turned on all the light. I actually keep the light on in my bedroom the whole night, that finally put me at ease. For fear of get up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarm respectively at 6: 00, 6:10, and 6: 15. In order to prove that I could take good care of me, I washed my own clothes the next day, though I could wait for Mum to do it. I really felt proudly of myself and thought I had grown up.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

    One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky, that looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured. That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ^ )，并在其下面写出该加的同。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该同下面写出修改后的同。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The Moments(朋友圈) section of WeChat has become the popular part of the social networking platform. We can share everything about their life on it with our friend. Many teenagers, however, chose to keep their parents out their Moments. They argue that if their parents get involved, and they will feel upset. As far as I am concerning, I feel happily when my parents comment on my posts in my Moments. It shows their love and care for me. What's more, shut them off may make the generation gap bigger and bigger, when inviting them in would help us communicate better and feel closer to each other than before.