增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每句不超过两个错误；

      2）每处错误及其修改均只限一词；

      3）只允许修改10处。多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Jane is my closely friend from America. Last Sunday we went to the Phoenix Park for trip. The weather was such lovely that there was a great number of visitors in the park. To our excitement, there was a wonderful robot show who caught our attention. Some people were boating on the lake, while others are swimming. The Phoenix Park is more famous for its cherry blossom, and the park was like a sea of flower. We really enjoyed ourselves, so we couldn't help singing happy. When it started to get dark, they left the park for home.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I lived in my hometown ten years before．It was a quiet and beautiful village with green tree and clean water．I miss the days spend in my hometown so much.

    When I was in my hometown, I always wake up early in the morning．Some people took a walk around while others was doing their farm work．I used to go to the hill nearby with my grandpa on every day with a little dog following them. There I'd like to play the dog while my grandpa was taking care of his fruit trees. Sometimes I would go to the river to catch fish. What happy I was!

    I will keep the beautifully memory forever．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    As student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than be praised by my teacher before my classmates.

    Yesterday afternoon, Li Ming and I went home together after school. Suddenly we saw an old lady knock down by a car. The driver ran away in his car. Li Ming and I ran over to find whether the old lady's head was bleeding. She had already lost consciousness. Li Ming went to stop a taxi quickly. Immediate, I took out my handkerchief and covered the wound with them. Soon, Li Ming came back with the taxi. Together we put the old lady into the taxi and drive her to the nearest hospital.

The old lady was saved up and we also felt pleased. We also reminded her to exercise extreme cautious when crossing the road. What's more, I remembered the car's number but the traffic police caught the driver quickly.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Our school photography club is going to held an International High School Student Photography Show.

    As far as I know, the theme of the show is environmental protection. Actually, I know you are gifted in take good pictures and had always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I clearly remember you showed me some photo on that theme the last time when you visited our school. Beside, it will start on June 15^th and last three weeks. What makes me exciting is that any student whom is interested can participate in it. In word, I firmly believe this is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, send my photos to photoshow@126.com.

    Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Laura,

    Thanks for letting us to stay at your seaside house. Now, you might have heard from your neighbors about which happened on Saturday evening. When I was out a walk, my younger son, Tom, played football before your house. He made so many noise that the neighbors got quite angrily. Even worse, Tom broke one of the window of Mr. Wilson's house. Tom and I apologized to all the neighbors for the unhappy happenings, but promised to have the broken window repair soon. Tom said that we would not do such silly things any more. I am glad that your neighbors had forgiven us. They are really nice people.

Yours,

Betty