假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；   

2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

      The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

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增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ms. Smith,

    I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of the camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After that, you always gave me specially attention and inspired to me to join in activities. As a result, I gradually got to know the other camper. Because the help you gave me that summer, my life changed. I gained so much confidence that I go back to school as a new person. My grades improved. I became  very active but made new friends. Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college. I am proud of it. Felt grateful, I just want to thank you for helping me become a different person.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
①There was a time that this singer was popular with the young men.

②  It was a fun to play football after class.
③I am determining to change my job. No one else can change my mind.
④ He insisted that the problem discussed at the meeting was carried out right away.
⑤Shall we go straightly to the hotel or have a rest first?
⑥Although I try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard make good friends with them.
⑦Now they make up their mind to go and settle in the countryside.
⑧Parents should actively urge their children to take advantage with the opportunity to join sports teams.
⑨ She insisted that I went to the prison to visit her brother with her.
⑩It's no pleasure look through these any longer because nature is one thing that really must be experienced.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Do you know anything about drinks? Tea, coffee but cocoa are the three most famous drinks in the world? China is the homeland of tea which have become the national drink. In other words, tea is basical spread out from China. Referring to Chinese tea culture, it has several thousand years of history and can date back the ancient times. At first, our ancients find tea make them excited, but they thought that drink more would be causing damage to the morals. Until Tang Dynasty, tea culture began taking shape. When they came to Song Dynasty, people began to use tea in difference situations and tea culture became the more and more popular. Nowadays, tea still plays an important parts in our daily life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号( ∧ )，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I received your e-mail just now. Don't worry about me. I'm getting on good with my research work. But to my great surprised, you say you will give up in learning English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and she have lost interest. I'm afraid I can't agree with you. I know it is difficulty to learn English, but English is wide used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, it is a way. I'm looking forward to hear good news from you.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一次；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Most people today are only worried about get good jobs to make lots of money. In our free time, they think about what to do for fun. However, few people think about what they can do help others. There are many people which are less lucky than us. Volunteering our time to help these people is the good way to spend our free time. For example, we can make plans to visit sick child in the hospital or raise money for homeless people. Some people even stopped their jobs for a few of months to a year to move to another place, unlike one of the countries in Africa, but help people there.