增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ms. Smith,

    I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of the camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After that, you always gave me specially attention and inspired to me to join in activities. As a result, I gradually got to know the other camper. Because the help you gave me that summer, my life changed. I gained so much confidence that I go back to school as a new person. My grades improved. I became  very active but made new friends. Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college. I am proud of it. Felt grateful, I just want to thank you for helping me become a different person.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As a service dog, Sandy's job is help manage a medical condition I have. My condition can be dangerously. When something bad happen, Sandy will tell my parents immediately. Of course, I help take care of Sandy, too. I feed him, walk him, but even take him just about everywhere I go. If I don't bring Sandy to me, he will get upset. Once he stays with my grandparents for a few hours while my parents and I went to the beach. Sandy was upset in the whole time. He never stopped look for me. When I got home, he was such happy that he rushed to me. I love his dog very much.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余 词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Rita,

    I'm glad that you will compete in the final of the Chinese Speech Contest. Congratulation to you! Here are my advice on how to make good preparations for your speech.

    First, pick a interesting topic so that the audience won't get boring. Second, do broad researches on the topic to satisfy the audience's hunger for knowledge. Then write your speech and turn to your Chinese teachers for help, which advice will be beneficial. Besides, much attention should be paying to your voice or body language. Try to speak as fluent as possible. In a word, you'd better do whatever you can win the contest.

    Where there is a will, there is a way. Looking forward to hearing from your good news.

Yours,

Joana

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards it may make a difference.

    I still remember how my spoken English was improved. In a beginning, I always kept silent in our oral class to avoid make mistakes. Before long my teacher got to know about my situation. He encouraged me to speak out that I thought. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraging, my teacher and my classmates would help me figure out how I could have avoided them. I also joined in an English club to get more chances to speak. Practice made perfect. Now I can talk fluent in English.

    Just as the saying goes, "Every bean has its black." Don't afraid of making mistakes. Learn from mistakes, or success is just waiting for us.