增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It is known that everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I enter the primary school. With modern life go rapidly nowadays, many people suffer from different kind of diseases, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in great need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people's lives. Although to be a good doctor is very difficult, but nowadays I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make ray dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I'll pay more attention on studies. After all, only by working hardly can one succeed.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： l）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    There is a tradition in my family. On New Year's Eve, all my relative will come to our house for a feast. As matter of fact, it isn't the food that bring us together but the sense of belonging does. Making dumplings was always great fun. We put a coin into one of the dumplings. Everybody expects to eat the one with the coin inside, because it is said whomever gets the coin will have a good fortune in the followed year. When my mom serves the dumplings, they help ourselves immediately, hoping to get the good luck of our entirely year. The coin never comes to me, and I am pretty sure of that the luck is always there.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Saturday, I went on journey by train. There were such many passengers that not everyone could get a seat. Many people had to stand, which was really tired. I had a reserved seat so I could sit comfortable. In front of my seat is a woman with two little kids. With the kid squeezing into their single seat, she had to stand up all the way. So I moved a bit but shared my seat with her. The woman felt very grateful to my selflessness. Seeing her beautiful smile, I also smiled. Share increased happiness!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)，不计分。

    Recently, every morning and evening, many people gather to dance in our community square, where is designed to improve living quality. Although dancing helps to keep healthy, but the long-time dancing and loud noise causing by the loudspeaker really bring inconvenience. I couldn't rest or sleep well, which made me terrible upset. I felt such sleepy in class that I perform worse in study. To solve a problem, I communicated with the organizer and suggested that they should shorten the dance time and reduce the music noise. Only this way can they have fun and let others enjoy life. To their joy, they adopted my suggestion.