假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm glad to write to share with you my
happiness of being admitted to my ideal college, and particularly I'm writing
to express my sincerely thanks to you.
Having been received the offer, I knew all
my efforts finally paid off. College life distinguished a lot from senior
school life. Undoubtedly, it's another life combined with challenge and sweet
memories. I can't wait to going to college.
A million thanks to your encouraging words, which
never fail to brighten my way ahead. There was a period where I was totally at
the loss, doubting whether I could make any progress in my study. It's you
helped cheer me up. Never will I forget what you said-doors open to the
very man with full confidence and instant action. But to your help, I could
never have enjoyed such joyful a harvest. I really appreciate your helpful
instruct. And I'll appreciate it if you could come to my celebration party on
August the 8th.