文中共有10处语言错误, 错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    This is a story was told by my father: “When I was boy, the most excited thing was to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn't wait for the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.' At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner I had waited for several month.”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mike,

    I'm so glad to learn that you're coming to Beijing to studying Chinese. I have got too much information about foreigners learning Chinese. Here I'd like to recommend you famous language school—Red Star Language School. It happens to have such a Chinese trained course that will satisfy you demands. It starts in Jan. 20^th and lasts a month till Feb.19^th. It was intended for beginners like you. Instead, the tuition is reasonable. It cost only RMB 2,000 (about $240).

    If you have any more questions, and please let me know or just send an email to help@redstar.org.

    Hope to see you in Beijing soon.

Yours,

Zhang Wei

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

3）必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。

    One month before, with the College Entrance Examination around the corner, 1 was nervous and in low spirit because of my poor performance. When l was at the loss and on the point of giving up, my head teacher comforted me and discuss with me the reasons for my failure in the exam. More unforgettable, he managed to help me with my study and inspired us. Determined to live to the expectations of my teachers and parents, I devoted myself to solve all the problems in my study and then made progress. I'm more than grateful for that he has done for me, from which I've got to know it is never too much late to get back when there is still a hope.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm glad to know that you are going to visit a village of our country this summer holiday, so I'd like to inviting you to come to mV hometown for a visit in July. I really hope you can enjoy them. My hometown is famous of its green plants and clear water, and there are many old and interested houses in my village. I'm sure that you will take some photo of the beautiful scenery and have good time. Great changes have been taken place in my hometown in the past few years. People's living standards have been great improved and they live a good life than before. The villagers will give you a warm welcome when you come. I will be quite happy because you can accept my invitation.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    It is clearly shown that many middle school students have physical and mentally problems. 68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won't obey our parents or teachers. Personally, I think we student should balance physical exercise and studies. Without good health, one can't achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework, but more time will be left for afterschool activities. Only in this way can we live energetic and healthy life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack,

    I'm sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make friends. Now, I'd like to offer you any advice.

    Firstly, it's normal of you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment. Secondly, you should greet your classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly, it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities, what can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you're friendly to the others.

    I hope the above suggestion will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you in the future.

Yours,

Li Hua