增加：在 缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处,多者 （ 从第 11 处起 ） 不计分。

    The other day I was getting into my car when I saw the old man walking up the hill. He looked tiring and, as it was quite a rural area, I waited to check that he was OK. He was fine, so I asked her where he had been. He said he'd been taken a train and a bus ride just get out. He liked getting out once a day. He clear wanted to talk and we spent the next thirty minutes talk about his life. It cost me nothing other than thirty minute of my time. I learnt so much and he enjoy the encounter and left smiling.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Sometimes, we are affected by the people and things around us.

    I still remembered the winter dawn when I was awakened by the noise inside. It had been snowing heavily the whole night. So the campus was quiet but full of snow. Especially annoying by the unpleasant noise, I pulled the curtain aside, only find some cleaners working hard to sweep the snow. With the rest sound asleep, these worker were fighting bravely with the coldness for the convenience of the others.

    In life, they are occasionally supported by the people around us, at which we are sometimes unaware. Never should we forget to be gratefully to the lovely strangers around us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1）每句不超过两个错误；

2）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

3）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Recently I've done a survey in our class on my classmates think of ads. The majority of my classmate take a positive attitude to ads in that ads do bring us convenient. Other students argue that being largely exposing to ads may lead to the sameness ranging from clothes, shelters to transportation

    From my point of the view, I prefer the former opinion to the latter for the following reasons. The first reason is rooted in the fact that there was various ads so that people have various choices. Secondly, with ads, that would be difficult to get across a product's basic message. However, ads, instead of making people seem to be the same, contributes greatly to people's better life.

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    In most cases, the very first thing that we ask for when visit a cafe or friend's house is the WiFi password. It's almost like the internet has become one of your basic needs. And according to technology website Digital Trends, up to 60 percent of people in the world still didn't have an internet connection. The situation is even more worse in the least developed countries—only one tenth of the people has regular access to the internet. That's why in the recent survey in the US, 68 percent of the respondents think of internet access to a privilege instead of a human right.

    However, the United Nations made this clear in a report back in 2011 that it believes internet access should be a human right, and it "should be a priority (优先考虑的事)for all states" to make sure everyone has access to the web.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I am a student from Hangzhou Senior High School. I'm having some trouble with your classmates at the moment. I'm very shy that I'm not good at communicating for people. Although I try to talk to my classmates and play with them but I find it hard to make friends with them. So I felt quite lonely sometimes. I really want change this situation. But I don't know how to solve the problem. As the result, I am very worrying. I will be thankful if someone can give me some advices to deal with my trouble as quick as possible.