增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每句不超过两个错误；

      2）每处错误及其修改均只限一词；

      3）只允许修改10处。多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Jane is my closely friend from America. Last Sunday we went to the Phoenix Park for trip. The weather was such lovely that there was a great number of visitors in the park. To our excitement, there was a wonderful robot show who caught our attention. Some people were boating on the lake, while others are swimming. The Phoenix Park is more famous for its cherry blossom, and the park was like a sea of flower. We really enjoyed ourselves, so we couldn't help singing happy. When it started to get dark, they left the park for home.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    If you are on the street, you will see all kinds of people passing by. It's not rare to see people with bad manner. Some throw away rubbish casually. Some spits in public. Some even sit or lie on the ground, completely ignore others' feelings. People feel really badly about all these behaviors.

    To be honesty, smoking in public places makes me really annoying. As it is known to us all, smoking does harm for people's health. Not only is it bad for the smoker himself, but also it is threat to the public health. It was hoped that an effective way can be found to educate these people to behave well in public.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其右面的横线上写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，并在其右面的横线上写出多余的词，并用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词右面横线上面写出修改后的词。

注意：每句只有一处错误，多改不计分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the Internet three days ago. The gift whose the price is not high is a beautiful pink cup decorating with my sister's name, her date of birth, and some best wishes to her as well. It's such lovely a cup with a picture of a cartoon dog on it that both my sister and I liked it by first sight.

    Besides, I am very satisfying with Alipay Security Control, which is very convenient and safely. And I am pleased with the delivery service. I received the cup yesterday. Don't you think it's very fast?

    He enjoy shopping online very much. There is no doubt that more and more people preferred to shop online nowadays. We don't need spend much time going to the shops or markets with such a good number of different choice on the Internet.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    This summer holiday, I make a trip to Sanya with my parents, which was unforgettable experience for me. In the morning, we got to the hotel located in the center of the city. After breakfasts, we began our travel. At first, we took the bus to an aquarium(水族馆).Wandering in it, and of course I saw such many different kinds of fishes that I couldn't believe my eyes. We could also see the show of dolphins. Then we had lunch in a restaurant, which position was near the aquarium. The seafood, which was very famous in China, was deliciously. After lunch, we went swimming. The sea was blue and the beach was golden. We all enjoyed us in the sea. During this trip, we also went to some places which were interested and well known in Sanya. All at all, we had a good holiday.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈ 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉ 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Every year, my parents and I pay visit to my grandparents in my hometown.

    To be honestly, I didn't want to go this year. You know, my hometown in their memory was so dirty. Rubbish could be seen everywhere, that annoyed me a lot. After thinking for some moment, I asked my parents that whether we could let my grandparents come and stay with us. Heard this, they just smiled.

    When I got on the bus, I was surprised to find that the village was very clean that I hardly recognized it. Then I decide to visit my grandparents more often.