增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

3).格式错，不计分。

Dear Ms Jenkins,

    I'm Li Hua from your English writing class in last term.I'm writing to ask for your help.I'm applied for a part-time job in my city during the summer vacation,advertise by a foreign company.And I had just completed my application letter and resume.Besides,I am not quite sure of the language and the format I've used.Because I know you have a very tightly schedule,I need your timely help.I'd appreciate if you could spend some time going through them and made necessary changes.You can find my application letter and resume in the attachment.

    Thank you for your kind!

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last month while I was walking in the street, the foreigner came towards me. She seemed to be losing. She asked me if I could help him. I said yes, but when she started talking, I couldn't understand that she said. I could only say ＂I don't know＂, and then slowly walk away. Though I have studied English for six years, but I still can't understand English good enough. I know I'm not interested in English and I've also been very lazy to study it. Now I know the importances of learning English. I've decided change my attitude towards English and work hard on it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Life is a mystery and we will never know that is waiting for us. But one thing is for sure: problems are unavoidable. For us, it's the process of solving problems that help us grow.

    Making a speech in public used to make me frightening. With a strong accent and terrible pronunciation, I failed in speech competition many times, but I didn't lose my heart. I was admitted by the school speech club. I considered it a good chance for me to improve myself. With a help of others, I recorded my speech, listening to it and corrected my pronunciation. Now I am confident enough to give my best speech to you all.

    Don't afraid of problems, but make use of it to be the best of ourselves!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last week our school hold a sports meeting. Realize it was our last school sports meeting, we decided to make it a unforgettable experience. We first attended the opening ceremony, for whom our class had made a lot of preparations. Much to our excitements, our performance was a success. My classmates participated various events such as running, the high jump and the long jump. Due to the hard training the athletes had done before, and their performance was very impressive. Finally the result came which our class won the second place! Cup in hand, we took a picture together proud. This sports meeting will be a precious memory for all of them as time goes by.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    Cherry, whom is about 5 or 6 years old, is my favorite pet. About three years before, Cherry showed up at our house. I have just lost my cat and was very sadly, so I didn't plan to owning another pet. At first, we ignored her. We were getting ready leave for a vacation. My two daughter kept wanting us to keep her and fed her behind my back. Finally I had to tell them if he was still here when we got back, we would keep her. I was sure a dog would move on. Guess what? When we got back from vacation, but the dog was still around. It seemed like an angel had send her to us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    The other day my friend Xu Rui found I am in low spirits, so she gave me a dozen roses to cheering me up. However, I only have one leave now, for I gave them all away. I gave one to my sister in hope that it would bring herself a little cheer. I took one to a friend who had not been feeling well recent. The flower or the visit helped much than I could tell but the friend was grateful. The rest went to those who had helped me in such many ways. Xu Rui gave me the flowers to help brighten up my day, but the biggest joy I received it was giving them away.