增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Sunday, I spent my lucky money on the special gift for my grandma. Early in the morning, I went to a cellphone store and choose a cellphone with large buttons specially designing for seniors. I gave it to my grandma when I visited her at the weekend. On receive the cellphone, my grandma was very happy and eager to learn why to use it. I patiently explained several important function she needed. My grandma learned carefully and wanted have a try. With my help, she successful called one of her friends. That afternoon, my grandma proudly told her neighbors that she must make calls with the new cellphone I bought it her. They all praised how thoughtful I was.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Mommy.

Happy Mother's Day! This is a special holiday because that it is a day for you to feel the appreciation for all you have done for Amy and 1. I am most thankful for all the sacrifices you had made in order for us live the most comfortable lives possible. You put yourself in difficulty situations so that we have food to eat, clean clothes to wear and a warm home to sleep in. Thank you for your endless love and hard works. Your efforts are never taking for granted. I really couldn't ask for the better mom. Through you, I am able to understand which true love is: loving someone unconditional for what they were, are and will be.

Love,

Anna

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    The findings of a recent survey suggests that students are not happy with multimedia approaches in education. They feel that they learn much effectively when traditional methods are used. The students interviewing said they thought the teacher played a important role in their learning. They found listening to the teacher, taking note, and using a textbook suitable for their age group really help them understand and remember the content of their lessons. They also found that answering questions that had been written on the board very helpfully. They valued the chance to carry practical, hands-on work, either.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2）从第11处起所改错误不给分。

   Andy is part of an android football team. He is able to run very quick. He has learned to signal to her teammates in computer language. Once a year they are allowing to get together to play a game of football. Last year, they won second place in Seattle Competition.  Personally, Andy thinks the team what won first place cheated. He thinks his team should encourage the programmer to improve their intelligent. In the way, the programmer is like a coach and programs players with all possible move. Andy is looking forward to play against a human team because he has programmed to act just like a man under the help of his electronic brain.

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

    Nowadays surfing the Internet has been part of our life．The Internet have made our life more convenient in many ways．We can acquire information keep in touch with our friends and relax us on the Internet．Therefore, the Internet has some negative effect on us teenagers．Some teenagers spent too much time chatting online．Others are addicted to play computer games．As result they don't have enough sleep or physical exercise ,what is harmful to their health．Worse still, they have trouble concentrating in their lessons． Because we are the masters of our country in the future so we must learn to be responsible for ourselves．I hope we all can get rid of playing computer games．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    As we all know, over seventy percent of our planet are covered by sea, where is rich in salt as well as fish. What's more, there is a great deal of oil or gas under the sea. In other words, the sea is the place with so many important things we live in. However, with the world population increased rapidly, overfishing has become a serious problem. Every day a lot of rubbishes and waste water are poured into the sea, so the sea is bad polluted. As a result, the number of fish has obviously decreased. Besides, some are dying out or have been died out. Therefore, it is time for everybody protect the sea.