Dear Jim,

    I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.

    Looking forward to receive your letter.

Yours,

 Li Ping

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    I went to Mount Tai with one of my friends. Mount Tai is famous as the green mountains. When they arrived at the destination by the bus, we caught sight of many mountains by looking through the mist. Mount Tai was just like sleeping baby at that time. That impressed me most was the sunrise on Mount Tai. Stood on the top of the mountain, I see the sunshine giving out in all directions. The green mountains in the mist and the shocking expression on people's face made a peaceful picture. The scenery of Mount Tai left a greatly impression on me.

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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear David,

    I'm more than pleasing to know that you are learning Chinese. I'd like to recommend www.edchinese.com to you. It's a good website for non-Chinese speakers which are learning Chinese, especially for beginner.

    Firstly, it provided you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Through this courses, you will have a good understanding of the Chinese language as well as its culture.

    Beside, it will help you learn the Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs, enjoying Tang poems and watch Chinese movies.

    More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to help. And all this is free of charge.

    I hope you will find this website attractively and helpful.

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2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My name is Li Ming, a student studied in Ganzhou No. 18 Middle School. I am eager become a volunteer in your group and I can work till my next term begins. I have a real talent on singing. I get the first prize in the singing competition in our school last year. However, I can teach children how to sing songs. Besides, I play the piano very well, that will help a lot in my work. I am warm-hearted and always be ready to help. Helping other people makes myself happy. I believe I can make friend with the children. I hope I am fortunately enough to be a member of your group.

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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Nowadays fewer students take exercise due to various reason and some students fall ill every now and then because of they are not healthy or strong enough. However, we should take exercise regularly to improve our health.

    First of all, taking PE classes seriously. In PE classes we can build up our bodies with the careful guidance of PE teachers. Secondly, it is of great important to make it a routine to exercise after class or during breaks. In addition, it was also a good idea to join a sports club that you are interested.

    As the old saying go, "The first wealth is health." Let's do more exercise to live a better and healthy life.

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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Tom and David are all my nephews. They are of same age. Tom loves reading while David doesn't. Why? It has something to do with what they were brought up. When Tom was about two years old, his parents started reading about stories to him. When he was a bit old, he was asked to read picture books by themselves. By six years old, he has formed the habit of reading regular. But David's parents didn't read to him and ask him to read. So it's no wonder that David doesn't read now. I think parents play a really important role in help their children fall in love with reading.