增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Sunday, I joined the voluntary group to help keep the traffic in good order at a big crossing near our school. At 8:00 a.m., we arrived there, wore red vests with the word VOLUNTEER on the back. We helped with the police remind the passers-by to obey traffic rule. To our delighted, they all waited for the green light patient except one motor-biker. We also give out some hand-made brochures about traffic regulations, for that many people praised us. About 4 hours later, they said good-bye to the police and left. Tired as we were, we all felt an honor to do our parts.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    On November 12, 2017, the student in our class paid visit to China Science and Technology Museum.

    At 8:00, we left to China Science and Technology Museum by bus. At 8:30, a guide introduced it to us briefly and told us that what we should pay attention to during we visit. Ten minutes late, we began our visit. Some students took notes carefully as they visited. All the students were amazing at the rapidly achievements in science and technology. Three hours has gone by before we knew it. At 11:30, we returned to our school.

    This visit no only broadened my outlook but also aroused my interest in science and technology.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to get employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside. Unfortunate, there are not enough job in big cities, when in the countryside talented people are bad needed but a lot of good jobs are waiting for you. You can put your abilities into good use and you will able to make greater contributions of building a modern countryside. Therefore, I believe in you can have as bright a future in the countryside as we will have in the cities.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    The other day my family spend a happy seaside holiday.

    Early in the morning, my father drove my mother, my brothers and me to the seaside. On arrive there we rushed to the sea immediately and swam happy. It was a sunny day and the sand beach was soft or comfortable. My lovely mother began to make some sand tower with some little kids. My father sat under a umbrella, chatting with others about Chinese stars. While my father was listening to others for, he was always carrying a bottle of cola in her hand. Time past quickly and the clock struck 12. We went hungry and had leave the seaside for the restaurant nearby.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在情的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第1l处起）不计分。

    Last Sunday, the weather were good. In the morning, I went the bookstore by bus. There were many new book in the bookstore. I didn't know which one to buy. At last, I decide to buy two English books because of I wanted to improve my English. In the afternoon, I went to the cinema with my classmates to see a film, that was Amazing China. A film was so wonderful that all of us were deep moved. One of my classmates said he would like to see them again. What a meaningful but happy day it was!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Dad,

    You are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health. I was worried about your health all the time. I'd like to give you some advices. I hear that walking is the best sport. Your company isn't far away from home, is it? Why not to walking to the office? You'd better take exercise at most once a week. You can play a basketball in the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice too. Try not stay up too lately. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Of course, this is very important to have healthy food. Dad, please receive my advice. I really wish you good health!

Your loving daughter,

Mary