增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    After shopping,Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch.I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple.They ate silently,and it was clearly that things were not going well.As we left, Mother stopped on their table.“Excuse me,”she said,put her arm around the unhappy old woman.“You remind me so many of my mother.May I hug（拥抱）you?”The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it.After we left,I said, “That was very nice of you,Mother.So I didn't think she looked like Grandma.”“Neither did me,”said Mother cheerfully.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My grandmother loves me very much. She is a easy-going woman. However, when it come to my study, she is very strictly. She spends more than one hour examine my homework every day. With my help, I have been doing well in my study. My grandmother is also kind to her neighbors and always ready help them. One day, a boy whom is one of her neighbors injured his leg for carelessly. My grandmother took the boy to the hospital at once and pays the fees with her own savings. Now she is living in another city with my aunt. We all miss her very much but I hope that I can go to visit her soon.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Harry,

    I have good news for you that there will be a international music camp in our city this summer The camp is openly to students from all over the world who is interested in playing musical instruments. I know you are a music lover, so why not to join the camp together with us?

    At the camp, campers are giving classes by experts in the moring and in the afternoon they do a couple of hour of practice. In the evening, there is a music exchange concert that campers can give performances and plays different kinds of music from their own counties.

    I'm sure you will have a lot of funs there. I'm looking forward your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Everyone tends to have many problems while gaining knowledges．Therefore，your willingness to deal with these problems will eventually enable you to work it out．What I'd like share is my approaches to solving the problems．

    First，you must focus on which you are faced with．There seems to be a lot of attractive things，like computers or game．To stay focused，you can list these things and tell yourself you should touch them after finishing your work．Second，believe to yourself．Though there is no doubt that each of us might make mistakes or come across some tough problems in learning，but it can never be a reason for the loss of confidence．

    Last，keep active．Never fee1 worrying to turn to your teachers or classmates．Everyone in your surroundings can be your teacher．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My cousin, Daniel, is the most success person I know, even though he has had many difficulties on his road to achieve success. His parents died in a accident when he was 17. Daniel needed to take care of his two younger brother, so he left school and found a job at a supermarket. At night, he helped them about homework and did all the housework. Daniel was also a very good worker. His boss was decided to help him go to college. It takes Daniel eight years, but finally he finished. Now Daniel plans attend a business management course and start his own business three years late. Daniel has a dream, but he is working hard to achieve it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Nowadays we are living in an information age, when TV, cellphones and the web are using widely. It seems that many people can't enjoy himself without them. However, were I to give up one of them, I will turn off my TV, but not cutting off the Internet. The reason is because there are few shows I fancy and there are too many commercials. What's worse, most programs on the TV are also available somewhere else. Not only cellphones but also the web are necessary for me. I need a cellphone to keep touch with my friends and family. And almost all informations can be gathered on the Internet.