假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I used to be a person who hates
exercising. But after I started playing baseball, I attracted by the sport.
Therefore, I cut down on most of my spare time, like shopping. Though it wasn't
the hard process for me, I needed to make more of an effort than others. I
enjoy the feeling of work with my teammates as well as the time we spend it
together. There is a proverb that goes, "The process is much beautiful
than the outcome."
I am a beginner in this sport.
Sometimes people will look down on me, and it doesn't matter. It will only make
me keep trying. Only with practising over and over again do I believe I can
catch up with other fantastic player one day. The challenge encourages myself
to go on.