假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词;
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:⒈每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
⒉只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One Saturday morning, I
suddenly noticed my room was in a completely mess, what really annoyed me. I
realized too many useful things took up a lot of space. So I decided to throw
it away and do some cleaning. It took me a whole day get all the works done.
Finally the room was tidy again and everything was in the order.
This was also true for life: we
add more and more to our life, hoped to get a better life. But sometimes the
more we add, the bad our life becomes. After all, sometimes less is more.