Dear Jim,

    I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.

    Looking forward to receive your letter.

Yours,

 Li Ping

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此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A )，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。.

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

    All of us need friendship. The understanding
between two friends mean both of them have similar
ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is
impossible for him to help each other and to make
their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes，
“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So really friendship
should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is
wise to have as many good friends that we can.
The more friends we have, the more we can learn for
one another, but the more pleasure we can share together.

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I went to London for a visit two weeks before. While walked in Hyde Park one morning, I found an ID card of a Frenchman on the ground. There is nobody around, so I figured that it was best to pick them up. The moment I got back to my hotel, I searched for the owners online, and found a Facebook account that exact matched his picture. It was happened that his phone number was in the account, but I sent him a message with a photo of the ID card. He wrote back to me with no time. And next day he picked up the ID card from the hotel's front desk.

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删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误仅限1词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I've learnt from the notice that you're looking for an English editor for our school paper. I'm written this letter to apply to the position.

    I'm Li Hua, Senior Three student in our school. In my view, I met your requirements. For one thing, I'm willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others. For another, I'm good at both English or Fine Arts. I'm either skilled in using computers. I would be glad when you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview.

    I'm looking forward to your kind earliest reply at your convenient.

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Chris,

    I learn that some people laugh at me for being overweight. Don't be so worried about your figure.

    I know a group calling HOOP from the Internet, which is established to be the voice of the overweight persons. It made up of a group of friendly and supportive people, all understanding the struggle of being overweight. So you will not feel lonely when you exercise. There are a plenty of activities and trainer who don't push you to do what you dislike. With their support and encourage it's easy for you to leave your comfort zone and try something new.

    I would high recommend HOOP to you. Whether it's to complete a personal challenge and start a healthier lifestyle, HOOP can really help you become the best version of you. Although you keep exercising, your figure will be good than before. Best wishes!

Yours,

Vivian

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删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Healthy eating along with regular exercise is probable the only way to become fit. As a teenager, it is important give your body the energy it needs. For a healthy diet, you should eat mostly rice, bread, vegetables and fruit. They also need to drink plenty of water. Besides, exercise is one of the most important things which can help to make you look good and feel good. Experts suggested teenagers spend at least 30 minutes exercising, five time a week. A good amount of sleep every night are also important for your health. As the matter of fact, loss of sleep can have a bad effect to you. If you follow the suggestions above, you'll look and feel much more better in no time at all!