删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I was only 10 when we move to Switzerland. I remember that I enjoyed flying across the whole country and that I wasn't very happy about leave my friends. But Dad said it'd be good for we all to live in countryside around Bern（伯尔尼）. And Uncle Jack, who'd been living there for about 20 years, were always telling us how a beautiful city Bern was. He said it would be easily for Dad to get a job in Bern, but we all agreed to move to there. Now we've been here for quite a few year, and we all love it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线(__)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Two people were arrested yesterday at Paris airport for bringing animals into Europe from South America illegal. One customs officer recalled that he noticed a strange woman walk in front of a group for a long time. Having seen feathers falling under her coat, and the customs officer asked the woman to come over to desk. He was surprised to find ten bird inside his coat. There was a short and fat gentleman followed her. It seems that he had a moving stomach, though customs officers called him over. On taking down his jacket, they found a tortoise. In fact, that man had traveled on the plane as this, keeping the tortoise hidden in a blanket.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删减：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    When I was very young, my parents teach me the value of writing thank-you notes. Whenever they asked me to, I would roll my eyes and write it after birthdays and some festivals unwilling. Only after my grandmother passed away I realize their impact. My mom and I had the task of clean my grandmother's house. I opened a drawer in her bedside table which I found a beautiful wooden box. I opened it but was shocked to see every card I had ever written to her. The impact of a moment stayed with me all my life. When I had children, they learned from the value of writing thank-you notes and still do so, even as grown adult.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As is known by all, illnesses always bring pains and sufferings to humans, but doctors can help us get rid of it. They got trained to know the causes of different type of illnesses and the best ways to cure patients. That's why doctors are highly respecting. I want to be a doctor in the future. Be a doctor, of course, is not easy because it requires difficult process of learning. However, I have faith in overcoming all the challenges and eventual realizing the dream. Also, I know how I should do now is to learn as much as possible, particularly chemistry and biology. To realize my dream of becoming a doctor, and I will spare no effort.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My neighbor Mrs. Li is a curious lady. Yesterday morning a mailman rang my doorbell. Hear the bell, Mrs. Li put her head out of the windows immediately and asked in a loud voice, "What's the matter?" "Are you Li Xia? There's package for you," answer the man. "Where is it come from?" Mrs. Li asked. "It's from London." Then Mrs. Li asked the mailman to open it. Feeling puzzling, he replied that he couldn't open the package and asked Mrs. Li to come down and open it herself. Mrs. Li refused polite. The mailman was a little bit angry but asked impatiently, "Why?" "Because I'm not Li Xia. She lives next door. I played a joke of you."

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I'm glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to my ideal college, and particularly I'm writing to express my sincerely thanks to you.

    Having been received the offer, I knew all my efforts finally paid off. College life distinguished a lot from senior school life. Undoubtedly, it's another life combined with challenge and sweet memories. I can't wait to going to college.

    A million thanks to your encouraging words, which never fail to brighten my way ahead. There was a period where I was totally at the loss, doubting whether I could make any progress in my study. It's you helped cheer me up. Never will I forget what you said－doors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action. But to your help, I could never have enjoyed such joyful a harvest. I really appreciate your helpful instruct. And I'll appreciate it if you could come to my celebration party on August the 8th.