增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（  ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（    ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.  {#blank#}1{#/blank#}  {#blank#}2{#/blank#}

My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help.  {#blank#}3{#/blank#}  {#blank#}4{#/blank#}

Mum taught me  some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. {#blank#}5{#/blank#}

I  thought the biscuits were really well. {#blank#}6{#/blank#}

My only mistake was that I dropped  some on the floor after I was packing them up.    {#blank#}7{#/blank#}
 At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly  who made them and joked,  {#blank#}8{#/blank#}

“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”  {#blank#}9{#/blank#}
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! {#blank#}10{#/blank#}

增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I like traveling and my dream of visit Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during the National Day holidays this year. In October 1st, I went to Tian'anmen Square with my parents, there we watched the flag-raising ceremony. As I watched flag rising slowly, I sang the national anthem, feeling extremely exciting. Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proudly. I thought of the old saying that “One who fail to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.” Although I was tired, but I really had a good time.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Everyone should take the action to reduce haze(雾霾)，which is harmless to our health．First of all，I believe that if we plant more tree，there will be less haze in their city．Trees can absorb exhaust fumes(尾气)from cars，thus reduce pollution．Second，the government should punish the factories where produce too many fumes．Exhaust fumes is the main cause of haze and do greatly harm to people's health．Maybe we can move factories to areas where few people live．Third，I think it was a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation．Last but not least，we can call on citizens ride bikes if they travel short journeys.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（{#blank#}1{#/blank#}），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go. Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirits. On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house. We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixing with laughter. At noon we reached top of the mountain. That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenes here. After having a short rest and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down. It rained even harder. We are wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Andy,

    You ask about my health your last letter. So I am going to tell you anything about it. I think I am very healthily. That's why my family live near the sea and we have fish about four time a week. That my mom cooks for us is always delicious. My family don't eat much fat and sugar either. There are some photos taking last week in the letter that I hope you like them.

    Goodbye.

    Zhou Kai

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last week I paid a visit of my friend Li Lei. His mother sincerely asked me to stay for lunch with them, and I agree. There were only three people for lunch all altogether. However, my friend's mother prepared eight dish and we couldn't finish the food at all. As the result, the food that was not finished thrown away in the end. When I went back home I saw some homeless people beg in the street, where reminded me of the wasted food. I felt really sad. What I wish that no food would be wasted from now on! In this way, nobody on the earth will be hunger.