增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Peter,

    I was so pleasing to hear from you and am writing to introduce our school to you. When you enter the school gate, you can see a wonderful fountain in front you. On your left is the teaching building, a tallest building in our school. The specially designed art center is on your right, that is very beautiful. Walking on further, and you will find our lab building. Besides it, there lies the sports ground, where we held every sports meeting. Surrounding with trees, our school provides a comfortable learning environment.

    Welcome to our school. I believe you will have a nice time here because of our various school activity. The teachers and students here are nicely and friendly. Waiting for your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    When we are happy, we would like share our happiness with others, making them know our enjoyment. When we are not in a good mood, we wanted to get someone whom can listen to us. Be a listener is not easy. People always complain about our worries, and a good listener should listen to them but learn to comfort them. To be a good listener can help us make good friend with others. The one who always listen to others tends to be easy-going. When he is in the trouble, his friends will be willing to help him. So let's learn to be a good listener from then on.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My grandfather and I enjoy fishing. On Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute , my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As everyone knows, parents are concerned about their kids, so do my parents. They often get nervous when I'm about take an important test, which in turns adds to my anxiety. Now I have decided to discuss over the problem with them. I'll tell them I have set a goal for myself and I will try to achieve them. When my parents are convincing I'll be responsible for that I should do, they surely won't feel worried any more. If you face the same problem, why not talking to your parents face on face? It will be a easy way to get on well with your parents.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I seldom have the chance to talk native English speakers, even though I have learned English for many years. Last year my school has a cultural exchange program and there were some foreign students came to study in my school. I was lucky to become the foreign student's partner. My job was to help him solve daily problem. At first, I was much nervous that I couldn't speak very fluent when we talked in English. However, my partner encouraged me or listened patiently. As we communicated more, he taught me some interesting idioms, which made me to sound like a native speaker. How a valuable experience!