增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Mobile payment is very popular in China, that has made people's daily life more and more convenience. Most people are used to pay by scanning QR codes. By mobile payment, you can pay easy wherever you go. You can buy breakfast on the street and pay by scanning with you smart phone. However, in the subway station, you scan with your smart phone buy your ticket. Mobile payment is popular to most Chinese people, allowing us to say goodbye to wallets and bank cards. So it has greatly been changed people's lives in China. It seemed that China is really leading in some ways and is also sweeping other nations.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My cousin Li Ming told me he would be taking his driver's test again. He seemed confidence, although he have failed his first road test. I felt sympathy for him, think he might have a same fear he did last time. I encouraged him, though I was not so optimistic about their chances. Later on, he called share the good news that he had passed it. Before the road test, our family gathered excited at his house. I congratulated him with a hug. I asked him to drive with me anywhere he liked. Three of our cousin piled in with us and we took our first ride with Li Ming.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Now I'd like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we had held a grown­up ceremony for our come 18­year­old birthday. At first we made an promise that as grown­up we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we expressed our thanks to our parents they had gone through hardships to bring us up and our teachers who had been educating us patient. And our teachers also gave them cards expressing their good wishes. Finally we put on wonderfully performances, singing or dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it is of great important for us. I will never forget that day in my life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    This summer, I attended a journalism­themed summer camp, where I learn a lot.

    What impressed me most was the interviews carrying out in the streets. In the beginning, I wasn't used to talk to strangers. But with my teammates encouragement, I was able to communicate smooth with them. Then we were noticed most of the answers we got were brief. After a discussion, my teammates and I realized that was why our questions weren't open­ended enough. So we changed their questions and our interviewees were more willing to share with us their ideas in end.

    From this experience I've gained several skill for interviewing people as a journalist.