注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything but could make decisions by myself. Besides, my parents didn't seem to think so. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on their own, but I still want to have my parents to turn whenever I need help.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线\画掉。

修改：在错词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Nowadays, more and more people have their own mobile phones, some of who are always lowering their heads to play the mobile phones instead of communicating with their families. That is so annoying. In fact, the further distance in the world is not between life and death, however when I stand in front of you, you are playing with your mobile phones. I complete understand it because my sister is one of the phubbers（低头族）.

    Last weekend, I went to KFC with my sister. I wanted to order some foods, so I asked her what she would like to eat. She didn't make any response to me but kept talk with her friends on Wechat. I felt angry, and I shouted her: “It is impolite to play your mobile phone at table.”

    In my opinion, it is high time that we throw away the phone and raised our heads up. Do cherish everything around me and appreciate the scenery in the front of us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    A year ago, the factory where my brother worked closed down because of poorly management. He became one of those people who was out of work overnight. He didn't complain like others. However, he thought of it as a good chance. To equip himself with a bright future, he attended evening class to learn more knowledge. And at the same time, he opened online bookstore. Owing to her good service, the bookshop was very popular. His hard work had finally paid off. Talk of his success, he smiled and said, “God help those who help themselves.”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables！

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I sat at my favorite table in a restaurant last Sunday and wait for the food I had ordered to arrive. I suddenly found that Lin Ling, one of my classmate, worked like a waitress there. Honest speaking, it was great surprise for me to find her working there. As far as I know, she's from a richer family. What was it that made her to work there? I walked up to her and asked her the reason. When asking, she said, "I just want to earn some pocket money so that we can help some children in poor areas go back to school." How a good girl! I should learn from her.