增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown, he came to China for the first time, to the Great Wall in last weekend. Having told about the history of the Great Wall, he was amazing at this world wonder. He was struck by the beautiful of the Great Wall. So I took photo of him, which would be a good memory for him. At the top, Mr. Brown was very interested in the activity of protecting the environment that he was eager to join in and then sign his name. Both the Great Wall or the Chinese people deep impressed him. He decided to visit more places of interest when free.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Today, I had a very had luck. I was fighting for fun with some classmates after physical education. I wave my arm with such great strong that my watch got loose and flew off my wrist! Just then, some girls were passing by and a flying watch hit one girl's mouth exactly, these two teeth were knocked off. My mother was called in to deal the matter. We made an apology to the girl but took her to hospital to treat my wound.

    I was teaching a great lesson in this incident. I shouldn't have been made sudden and strong actions. From now on, I'll take care to do anything, acting quiet and carefully!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改5处，多者（从第6处起）不计分。

    The World Wide Web was invented in 1991 by an English scientist, Tim Berners-Lee. Berners-Lee built his first computer while he was at university use an old television! It is the first time that he had come up with the idea of the World Wide Web in 1989 while he was working in Switzerland. He made that possible for everyone to use Internet, which has created thousands of millionaires. Years later, it became the biggest source of information in the world and was consists of millions of pages of data.

增加： 在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从 11 处起)不计分。

    One day, I was cooking in the kitchen when the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I dashed back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was bad burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then rushed out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I was rather worrying. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Animals are our friend. As students, what should we do to protect from animals?

    Firstly, we mustn't litter, that is the easiest way to helping protect the environment. Littering increase the damage to animals' habitats. Secondly, persuading our parents not to buy jewelry made of ivory and clothing made of animals' fur. That will also help protecting animals. Thirdly, it's necessary to make more people realize importance of protecting animals. Lastly, be brave to stop those who harm animals.

    I believe that if we all try their best, animals will be protected good.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    This morning I happened to meet a foreigner when I was taking walk in the park. It was a good chance for me to practise my spoken English, but I went up to him, introduced himself in English and expressed my wish to have a talk with him. In my surprise, he just stared at me, looking puzzling. I thought I had not made myself understand, so I repeated again what I had said. But he just said anything that I didn't understand. I suddenly realize he was not an English speaker! Not all foreigner speak English.