注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear David,

    Sorry to learn that you've put on weight. Eat too much food in McDonald's and KFC must be the reason, I guess.

    You have to realize that food is not always as healthy as was said in the advertisements. If you know much about them, we will find fried chicken and French fries are rich in fat, sugar and salt. They can make you to gain weight and become sick.

    That you ought to have every day are noodles, rice, fruit and vegetables rather than the junk food. Energy-giving food, body-building food and protective food makes up a balanced diet. In word, you must have an idea of how a healthy diet should be and stick to it.

    I hope my advices can help you improve your health.

Yours,

Li Ming

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其右面的横线上写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，并在其右面的横线上写出多余的词，并用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词右面横线上面写出修改后的词。

注意：每句只有一处错误，多改不计分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last week, my parents took me to the seaside. As soon as we reached the beach, I ran to the sea and jump in the water. The water rolled away from us. I still remember the sound of the water hit the beach and the foam (泡沫) of water as foam in soda or beer. I looked along the beach for shell to collect. I found a beautiful one, but sudden the owner of the shell appeared from inside. I was so surprising! My father told me to leave it since it was dangerous animal. When we went home, I decided I should return all the shells back to the beach to be part of the home of crabs.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Dream is a common word in our daily life. As we all know, people liked to use it to express the strong desires they have for our future. Some young people dream of become scientists when others wish to become astronauts.

    In my opinion, what matter most is that we should be responsible our society and its citizens. I want to be independent and have a strongly sense of responsibility. And also I want to be helpful to those in the trouble. Beside, I will learn modestly from those devoting themselves to our society. I do hope all of us can make every efforts to live our dreams.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I dream to be a popular teacher in the future because I hope I can bring knowledge and happinesses to children.

    With time go by, my wonderful middle school life is coming to an end. Just when I entered in Sunshine School, I was childish boy who liked playing computer games and fail many subjects in my first midterm exam. I even thought about giving up. It was Ms Zhang which encouraged me to face the difficulties bravely. With the help of my teacher, I overcame difficulties and now always do well in her school subjects. Thanks to Ms Zhang, I have gained a lot both in my study or in my life. I hope I can be as excellently as my teacher.

    Ms Zhang is happy about the fact which I want to become a teacher in the future. Now, I will make full use of every second and make my dream come true.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    Believe it or not, there is no such a thing as standard English. Many people think the English speaking on TV and the radio is standard English. This is why in the very early days of radio, those reporting the news expected to speak excellent English. When people use words and expressions different in the "standard language", it is called a dialect. Geography also plays a part in make dialects. American English has such many dialects because people have come from all over the world. The USA is a large country that many different dialects are spoken. Although many Americans move a lot, they will recognize and understood each other's dialects with difficulty.