增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear David,

    Long time no see! I miss you very much.

 I'm writing to express my thank for your help during the seven-day summer camp. I have made a great progress in my English by communicating to you. What is more, while visit some tourist attractions, you volunteer to be my guide and showed me a lot of American culture, it has broadened my horizons. Not only have I learn a lot about American culture, but also I have made good American friends. It was really a wonderful experience!

     By the way, would you like to join the summer camp in China the next year? I'd like to your guide and you can experience any Chinese culture and customs. I am sure you will have a great time.

    I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely.

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear friends,

    Do you want to live in a beautifully world? If so, this is our duty to protect the environment.

    We can just started from little things around us. First, we can stick to habit of walking to school instead of take a car or a bus. Second, it's also importance to reuse everything and value our school's environment by picking up rubbish and turning on the lights. Besides, it is necessary what we should protect flowers and trees. And also by growing different plant, we can make our world green. Let's all to take action now and try our best to protect the environment.

Thank you!

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ︿ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In the summer vacation, our family travelled to Xiamen and paid visit to my brother there. The journey we were walking on was long and bored. But as soon as I arrived, I fall in love with the city. The reason is because it is a very charming place. The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind to blowing on your face. The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship. You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. Besides, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be too careless when crossing the street.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Saturday our class went hiking in a countryside. We meet at our school gate and set off at 8:00 am. On the way, we were singing and laughing happily while a girl suddenly fell into a deep hole. She felt so frightening and even burst into tears. One of my classmate found a long rope and we got him out. Fortunately, she didn't suffer seriously injuries, but it seemed that her ankle slightly twisted. We managed to sending her to the nearest hospital. It is an experience we'll never forget it, though we didn't enjoy ourselves very much that day.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Once there was an old woman. She had a lot of money. She was kind and generously. She always did something help the poor. At Christmas, she handed out food, that was made by herself, to the poor. She handed out a turkey leg but a potato to every homeless person he saw. The homeless people love her very much. One homeless men took out a penny that he wanted to give to her as for a gift. She felt good. She was determined to doing more, so she gave $ 50 with every homeless person she saw.