假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：把错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Everyone tends have many problems while gaining knowledge. Therefore，your
willingness to deal with these problems will eventually enable you to work it
out. What I'd like to share is my approaches
to solve the problems.
First, you must focus on which you are faced
with. There seems to be a lot of attractive
things，like
computers or games. To stay focus, you
can list these things and tell yourself you should touch them after finishing
your work. Second, believe
to yourself. Though there is no doubt that each of
us might make mistakes or come across some tough problems in learning, but
it can never be a reason for the loss of confidence.
Last, keep modest. Never
feel embarrassing to turn to your teachers or classmates. Everyone
in your surroundings can be your teacher.
