假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which our old buildings, as well as many other similar ones, should be going to be pulled away to make room for a main street. So they had to move apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Thus, Mr. Yang doesn't seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line will be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.

删除：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

增加：该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在该符号下写出该加的词。

修改：该行错一个词；在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。（题在答题卡上）

    Research shows most students often communicate with their parents, and there are still some who think it embarrassed to share their ideas with them. Actually everyone should focus to family communication. They can strengthen the bond of the whole family and fill the gap between child and parents. Besides, share your personal problems and emotions will great help you reduce your pressure and build up your confidence. As for my family, we had a special dinner together every Saturday evening. Everyone takes turns to share one problem when the others try to giving suggestions. In this way the whole family can enjoy happy life. I think my family will stick to the tradition forever.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm happy to know about that you are interested in Spring Festival couplets (对联), symbol of traditional Chinese culture. The tradition of put up Spring Festival couplets dates back to the Song Dynasty. Therefore, not until the Ming Dynasty did Spring Festival couplets become popular nationwide.

    With black or golden character written on red paper, they are sticking on doors or walls. They are made up of positive words what convey wishes for love, health, success, wealth, happy and so on. A common theme of Spring Festival couplets is people's desire for a better life in the coming year. In addition, praising your motherland is another popular theme.

    Hopefully, you can have a better understanding because of my carefully explanation.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Mrs Brown was walking near a playground. She was a hurry to visit her four grandchildren. She missed him very much, because she had seen them for quite a long time. She was walking while suddenly she saw a ball coming in her direction. She was already in her seventy. Should she kick the hall to send it back and should she just go past leaving the ball where it was? Finally with greatly care she gave it a kick. The hall went straight out the goal. How wonderful it was! And she happened to have helped won the match. And all her four grandchildren were on team of the winners.

    On my fourteen birthday, I received lots of presents. Which present is the best in my eye? It's hand-made notebook, that my best friend Jane gave to me. Jane makes it by herself. On each page of the notebook, there's a picture for Jane and me with some words. She either encourages me or tell me how she feels about our friendship. Every time I look at the notebook, I'm touching by something warm. This present is a memory of the wonderfully time we've spent together. I will be keep this special gift forever.