When I was in high school, most of my friends had bicycle. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money.

    And he said he could only give me half of the money. I should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was please when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how happily I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last week, my teacher told us about our school's speech contest, which topic was “my hero”. I thought of my grandpa would be my perfect topic. Then I carefully prepared for contest. A couple of weeks later, after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! The final was held soon. I was the sixth to giving the speech. After I finished it, I saw the audience discussing and wondering what they were saying. After the last person finished, the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have won the first prize. The audience were going wildly, clapping and cheering! I was extremely happy. It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir or Madam

    I've learned from the newspaper dial my company is looking for a clerk. I'm very interesting in the job and I'd like to apply for at the position.

    First of all， allow me introduce myself. I have just graduated from senior high school and take the College Entrance Examination. I want to find an part - time job in the summer. I'm 18 years old and have a good knowledge of English, especially in terms at speaking and listening. In fact, I won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school last year. Besides, I'm quite easy - going and therefore very popular among my classmate.

    I sincere hope you can give me a chance. I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Hi, Tony,

    Good to hear from you! I'm glad that you're learning Chinese hard, because you feel it is difficult to learn it. Don't worry. I think a best way to learn Chinese is to ask your Chinese teacher with help. I hope you make great progress soon.

    Yes, you really have the Mid-Autumn Festival. It's on August 15th of the lunar calendar (农历). It's one of the most important festival in China. All the family members got together for a big dinner that day. We usual eat moon cakes while enjoyed the moon at night. We believe the full moon are the symbol of reunion.

Bye for now,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I was staying in a small village in Turkey. The countryside around the village was very beautiful that I decided to go for a walk. I had been walking for about an hour and a half while suddenly I had slipped and fell down a riverbank. I hurt my ankle and I couldn't stand up. I didn't know that I could get back to the village. I hadn't told someone where I was going, but no one would know where look for me when they realized I was missing. I began to worry that I might have to stay there all night. I had no water or food and no warm clothes. I was very frightening. Lucky, a couple of hours later, a young boy, that came past on a horse, lifted me onto the animal and took me back to the village.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在改词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.