Dear Mary,

    I receive your E-mail just now. Don't worry about me. I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests. I'm afraid I couldn't agree with you. I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I' m looking forward to hearing good news from you.

Yours

Li Hua

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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

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    Last Sunday morning, I was having a walk in the park near my home while I came across some people making a new film with one of my favorite actor. I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get it. Unfortunate, by the time I got back, they had finished the scene and the actor couldn't be seen everywhere. I was really disappointed and about to leave when he walked out a building. He were right there in the front of me! I couldn't believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with her, but also he signed his name on my shirt!

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注意： 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    As a saying go, “Pressure is another form of motive power”. However, many people can't deal with pressure in an appropriate way so that they become more anxiously. Seriously, it may cause many terrible personal problem. But how can you deal with pressure? To, begin with, anybody has pressure, but you should accept the pressure. If you are in deep pressure, you can distract your attention by doing some interested things like running, crafting or listening to music. Secondly, you should talk to family members and friends to reducing the stress, maybe they can give you some practical advice. Thirdly, you are need to learn how to self-adjust, that is the most effective way to help yourself. In word, pressure is an inevitable part of your life. You are supposed to make the most of it to promote ourselves.

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删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Dear Joy.

    How are you doing? Here is an exciting news for you. There will be an invention competition in our school in the 20th of October. However, there is a rule the participants shall be in a group. But I'd like to invite you to be my partners.

    I know that you have been longed to design a tiny cooler that people can wear around the wrist. I think it will be a wonderfully idea for the competition. We can make a small air conditioner to controlling the temperature of the wearer.

    How do you think of my suggestion? Looking forward to you reply.

Yours,

Zhang Xin

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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Nowadays, this is common to hear about a young person getting this or that kind of serious disease. A couple of day ago, a friend in her 20s asked me that whether I was familiar with some health products. She tells me that she got tired easily and seemed to be in state of sub-health. At the age of twenty, one should feel filled with strong and energy. And some people at that age have started to worry about their health. Since we now have more access to information about keeping healthy, we should start to act responsible and pay special attention to improve our health.

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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mary,

    I read your text message this morning. You suggested that we went to the concert this Saturday. I'm terrible sorry, because I have to see my parents at the airport. They are going to the Thailand for traveling but they will set out this Saturday. To be honesty, I'd like to go with you to the concert. There is said that the performance will last two week. How about go there next Saturday? Please let me know that it will be OK. I'm looking forward to receiving your call.

Yours truly,

Li Hua