本文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除和修改.增加:把缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.   注意: 1.每处错误极其修改均限一词.2.只允许修改10处,多者从第11处不记分.

    Mr. Smith had a 8-year-old son named Tony, who enjoyed listening to music very much. So he bought a piano to Tony, hoping that he can become a famous pianist one day. The little boy put her heart into practising the piano day after day and seemed enjoy every minute of it. However, half a year later, he told his father that he was tiring of practising the piano. Heard this, Mr. Smith said, “Tony, it is one thing to be fond of listen to music, but it is another thing to perform skillful by yourself. You can never play the piano well even if you don't practise more.”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear James,

    Thanks for your letter. I'm delight that you're coming over and we're all looking forward to see you again. I can understand you are nervous about travelling by your own. Don't worry! We'll pick you up at the airport. Telling me your flight number and arrival time, and we can meet you while you arrive. Kate wonders if you could bring him some of that wonderful cheese we eat in your parents' house last month. She keep talking about it. I don't think it should be problem bringing it into the country. Let me know as soon as you can book your flight.

Love,

Sandra

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm sitting in the warm night air with a cold drink in my hand and reflecting on the days. It's a day of a pure magic! I went snorkeling on the reef offshore this morning. Seen such extraordinary beauty, I think every cell in its body woke up. It was like discover a whole new dimension of life. The first thing I became aware was all the vivid colors surrounding me. And the fish don't mind me swimming among them. Therefore, there were other creatures what I didn't want to get too close to. What a tiny spot I was in this enormously world.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I am a student from Hangzhou Senior High School. I'm having some trouble with your classmates at the moment. I'm very shy that I'm not good at communicating for people. Although I try to talk to my classmates and play with them but I find it hard to make friends with them. So I felt quite lonely sometimes. I really want change this situation. But I don't know how to solve the problem. As the result, I am very worrying. I will be thankful if someone can give me some advices to deal with my trouble as quick as possible.

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Sunday, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and can't find her mother. We decided to help her. I tried my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying played with Lily. At last his mother came, that made me feel very happy. I thought I really did a good thing. If everyone helps with each other, the world will become more beautiful.