增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

刪除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Hello, I'm Li hua, chairman of Student Union. We' re going to organize a bicycle trip to our school farm on this Sunday. It was located in the western suburb, covered an area of about 50 acres.

    There are different kinds of cattle raised and various vegetable planted, without some harmful things in the feed or the fertilizer. The products are provided for the school canteen，which we enjoy a health diet. On the farm you can combine you have learned with practice to the fullest You are expected to arrive there at about 9 o'clock, Remember: following the workers and don't try to do anything strange to interest the animals or do damage to the plants during my visit.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    We often hear stories of animals rescued people. But now someone has managed to return the favor. The event took place on one snowy January morning where Thomas Smith was walking her dog, Jack, in the park. “As I was walking, I just saw Jack running onto the ice towards the ducks in the middle, and then he falls into the water,” said Smith. He realized he had no choice but try and save his dogs.” Finally, I got Jack by a neck and pulled him out. I don't think of I have ever felt so cold by the time we got back to the land. When we got there, everyone was asking why Jack was okay—no one was particular worried about me!”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词

    I am kind and generous. I am always ready to give hand to a stranger whenever possible.

    There are many reasons why helping others are good. Not only does it give us a great sense of satisfaction, but this satisfaction can result from a sense of belonging. I learnt this lesson by helping a total stranger out last Friday.

    I was riding a bike back home while I came across an old man lying in the middle of the street with a basket full of things beside me. See this, I quickly came to him and help him stand up. I was happy to see he was not serious injured. The old man was too grateful that he was moved to the tears.

    Helping others is really the easiest thing to make one happy!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last weekend l went fishing with my cousins by a river, where was two miles away from my home by bike. When we were about to return for home, we found one of our bike lost. We were really nervous then. Asking about the lost bike, nobody told the truth except me. And to my surprise, my parents don't scold me. Instead, they said I was a honest boy. I have benefited great from my family rules. I'm not the best at school work, but classmates trust me and nearly everyone is willing to making friends with me. It helps me know better about "Honesty is the best policy."

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈ 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉ 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm a huge book lover but like sharing my love for books! So I've been buying books frequent. Finishing reading one book, I often placed it in or around my school. In that case, some of my schoolmate can help themselves to a book. I especially like placing it on the only stone table in our school garden, in it students may have time to take up a rest. It was until last weekend that I saw a card leaving on the table to say thanks. And from the card, I knew my book turned out to be a birthday gift for a strange girl. I was so happy to find that my book could bring anyone pleasure!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Xie,

    I'm very exciting to write to you to express my thanks. I am Li Hua, one of the poor children who was crying for knowledge, but couldn't afford the school fees because my father was ill or my family was deeply in debt. Thank you for give me generous support so that I could have the chance go back to school. Has it not been for the support, I wouldn't have realized my dream. Your help makes much difference to me. I am sure to spread the love to help people in the need.

    In brief, my appreciation for your kindness can never be expressed in word. Please accept my sincerely gratitude.

Yours,

Li Hua