增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    Mrs Smith have been teaching us about kites. She told us that they were invented in China in more than 2,300 years ago. When our teacher asked us to design a kite it could fly, we started our pairs work at once.

    First we collected the materials we need. Tara brought the big plastic bag to school. I persuaded my dad to let me have some masking tape that left over last week where we had been spraying the rusty(生锈的)patch on the car. I also found some thin poles. But either Tara nor I could find any string at home, so we will get some for our pocket money on the way home tonight.

Li Ming

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My sister saw a lovely cup when we were shopping the another day. She began to like it at once. Then she bent down and picked it down to look at the price on them. As she did this, lots of teas splashed (泼洒) on her T-shirt! I had to try hard not to laugh at her shocking face! My sister was about to get out of the shop fast as she could when a shop assistant come over to us. It turned out to being her own cup, which she'd left on the shelf by the mistake. The assistant was clear as embarrassed (尴尬的) as my sister, but I just thought it was funny!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的单词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In the past when batteries in the electrical equipments in my house ran out, I would just put them in the garbage bag. Last week I learned from magazine that one battery could possible pollute 16 thousand liters of water. It is deeply shocked that a battery can be so a pollutant. Then I came up to an idea. I decided to transform one of my shoe boxes into a battery recycling box. Then I put them in front of our apartment building. To my delighted, the box was filled up in a couple days. Then I call the recycling center to collect the batteries. The staff spoke highly of all what I did.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 （︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I was used to be a healthy girl, but more than two years ago, I get into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks. In addition, I spent a lot of time lay on the sofa, watching TV, and doing little exercise. As a result, I put on such much weight that I found difficult to climb the stairs. So I decided to change my unhealthy life style. I began to have a balancing and healthy diet. I also took part in various sports activity such as swimming, skating, running or playing basketball. One year late, I became as fit as before.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As is known by all, illnesses always bring pains and sufferings to humans, but doctors can help us get rid of it. They got trained to know the causes of different type of illnesses and the best ways to cure patients. That's why doctors are highly respecting. I want to be a doctor in the future. Be a doctor, of course, is not easy because it requires difficult process of learning. However, I have faith in overcoming all the challenges and eventual realizing the dream. Also, I know how I should do now is to learn as much as possible, particularly chemistry and biology. To realize my dream of becoming a doctor, and I will spare no effort.