增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Everyone in our village likes my father, so he has a sense of humor. In the other words, he can make people laugh easy and they feel happy to be around him. Admired his good personality is the main reason for me to dream that one day I can be as humor as him. I even asked him how have a good sense of humor, but what he replied disappointed me. “Not everyone can make other laugh, because those that are of humor are usually born to be so,” he said. However, later, he adds, “But you can if you know a lot of joke.” That's why now I'm reading books about them.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My mother has always been a follower of traditional method when it comes to anything. She cooks traditionally food and likes the traditional way of shop. Therefore, now she always gets tiring when she goes out in the market. So one day I decide to introduce a new shop. I am talking about online gift stores. She has basic knowledge of computers. At the beginning, she was doubtful about shopping from these online gift shops.

    One day I taught him to buy some branded things so that she could build trust in these shops. I had ordered a Sisley handbag for her. Until then she has been shopping online.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It is well known that one of the aims of UNESCO is to protect and preserve culture and natural heritage. Our heritage is the precious gift from the past, and it is also what we live with today. I believed some of you may have visited Mount Tai and Mount Huang, or have been to Jiuzhaigou. Many people just find unbelievable that so beautiful places exist in this world.

    These heritage site impress visitors with their amazed beauty, and they are a great source of inspiration. There are altogether more than over 900 World Heritage sites. People have come to understanding the truth that they do not belong to any single person, and to all mankind.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I am interested at swimming very much. At first, I went swimming just to keep health. Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics. Though practicing in the pool is very bored, but I still work very hard in order to realize my dream. Because my hard work, I have already come first in much important competitions. In the competitions, I've made lot of friends and we're very close. It's much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.

    It was a fine day, my brother and I went to the cinema in bicycle. My brother was riding when I was sitting on the seat behind him. We were talking about the film what would be on show in the cinema. When we came to the crossroads, a young man and a young woman came up to us and said: "We have expected you at long last." We all felt very strange. Then they explained us, "We were stopped by a policeman half an hour ago for ride a bike with a person on the seat behind. The policeman asked us to catch the next offender. Hope you don't have to wait as long as we do. Good luck!" We had to stand on the road to find another offenders. Although we didn't see the film that day, it made us to remember the traffic rules and we'll never forget the usual day !

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jerry,

    Glad to learn that you had interest in Chinese food. Here I'd like to tell you something about them. There is a wide variety of food in China. For example, Shanghai food, a little bit sweet, differ from Sichuan food which is rather hot. However, every kind of Chinese food is worth try because each has rich and balance nutrition. Different Chinese restaurants usual serve different dishes. I guess the Cantonese cuisine (粤菜), it is a bit light, may suit you. I hope you can come China and experience the Chinese food culture.

Li Hua