增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

   删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

   修改：在错的下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The Moments (朋友圈) section of WeChat has become a popularly part of the social networking platform. We can share everything about our life on it with our friend. Many people, however, chose to keep their parents out from their Moments. They argue that if their parents gets involved, they will feel upset. As far as I am concerning, I feel happy when my parents comment my posts in my Moments. It shows their love and the care for me. What's more, shut them off may make the generation gap bigger and bigger, while inviting them in would help us communicate better and feel close to each other. 

增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    We took a 20 - kilometer hike last Friday. Early in the morning, we get together and set out on foot. We all carried backpacks with water and food. Upon arrival, we were impressing with the impressive scenery and had a great time. Gradual, we started to sweat a lot. Some of us became out of the breath and some fell behind, but we encouraged each other to keep going. Suddenly one of my classmate fell down. All of us ran up to help her, forget about our own tiredness. We finally managed to walk school. We were such pleased and proud.

    What a unforgettable experience! It's a journey of hard work and challenge, in that we've learned to be more determined and strong-minded.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Sunday, I tidied up my room and spot my albums. I looked through them, recalling the moment I had experienced —the best and worse years of my life. I stopped at a picture taking when I had my first football match. I felt such nervous then, because it was the first time that I had asked to play by the coach. Your job was to cooperate with other teammates and cover with the match after it was over. Although we succeeded, I still made several mistakes in the match where almost ruined our chances. When the photographer was taking a picture, everyone had a happy expression, except me. Holding the picture, I laughed. How interesting it was!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Henry Adams, the American businessman, was rescued and taken to London by accident. Wander down the street, he was penniless and hunger. Then he was invited into a big house, which the two wealthy brothers made a secret bet. While Henry was staring at the food leaving on the table, he answered their questions honest. The two brothers were pleased to find the person they wanted, so they gave him an envelope with money in it and Henry promised not to be open it until 2 o'clock. Henry went into a cheap restaurant to stuff his stomach. Everybody was rude to him if he was in rags. When Henry paid the bill with one-million-pound banknote, all the people doubted that the note was genuine or not. But later they changed their attitude completely and became polite.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

刪除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Time spent in a bookshop can be most enjoyable. Here is a moving story about it. Once there was a medical student wanted to read a textbook which was far too expensive to buy it. The only copy he could find was in a bookshop, but he couldn't afford it. So that he could do was to read it in the shop. Every afternoon, he goes to the shop and read some of the books at a time. One day, however, he found the book missed from its usual place. So disappointed, he was about to leave when he noticed an owner of the shop signaling to him. To their surprise, the owner pointed to the book, which was good put away in a comer. And he added that he put it there for case anyone else attempted to buy it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the zoo with Lily. There was lots of people there. I found a girl cry in the zoo. She was lost and she can't find her mother. We decided to help her. I tried my best find the broadcasting station in the zoo. On the same time Lily played with her and looked after her careful there. The little girl stopped crying and played with Lily. At last his mother came. I felt very happily. I thought I really did a good things. If everyone helps with each other, the world will become more beautiful.