增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time. With such pen pal, I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last week, my friends and me went to watch Jay Chou's performance in Guangzhou. There are crowds of cheerful fans there, many of who came from other cities. Jay began his performance with one of his most famous song. We all cheered and shouted out his name, but some even cried with joy. When Jay began to sing the seventh song it called Sunny Day, it started to rain. Therefore, the concert was not interrupted and we got even more exciting in the rain. At last, Jay finished the concert with a speech, thank his fans for always supporting him. What memorable experience!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    After spending many time at the hospital with my 70-year-old mother-in-law, we went out to have something eat at 9:30 pm. The server was very busy prepare to close the restaurant. However, he was kind and served us good without asking our reasons for so a late dinner. Before we left, I went up and gave him an generous tip even though this restaurant didn't require any tip. At first she refused but I insisted on and he accepted it finally. It make us both very happily.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Tom,

    I'm glad to hear that you are coming for a holiday in our city the next month. I'm such happy that you will stay in my house.

    There have been greatly changes in the last three year in my home. First, we have rebuilt your house, which now has four private rooms. You can choose any of them to live when you come. Second, my parents have set up a small restaurant in our village, that you can eat healthily. I'm really willing to be your guide to make your journey interested and meaningful.

    If you had any requests, don't hesitate to let me know. Looking forward to hear from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A），并在其下面写上该加的词。

易除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掠。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last year, we went for a exchange programme to England improve our English. The plane took off on time and we arrived smoothly at the airport situating in the west of London. Before I went, I was quite proud of their English, and everyone in England spoke so fast that I couldn't make out what they were saying. I wasn't even sure of whether the plane has already landed in the right country. I was in fear and wanted to go straight back home. However, things soon got better and better. The member of the host family were very kindly. And fortunately, the boy with him I was staying was keen on football. We had fun played together. I got used to living in England with the help of my host family.