增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One day, it was so hot that my parents and I went to Changli Park to enjoy the shade. On the way, I found I have forgotten to bring my cell phone with me, but I returned for it. Reach my home, I noticed one of the window wide open. “My parents aren't at home. Who can it be?” I wondered. I walked to window, looked through it and in my surprise, found two strangers were trying to open a case. I was so frightened at the sight which I couldn't say a word. I left there silent without being noticed. Then I phoned the police for help. Five minutes late, three policemen appeared and caught up the two thieves.

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Like most of my schoolmate, I have neither brothers nor sisters — in any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dear of course and will do all they can to make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family. They want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? What things are in other homes, I wonder.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删减:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Monday, our class hold a speech contest on the theme of thankfulness. Both of us took an active part in it because we were interesting in it. In beginning, our teacher made a speech, appeal to us to be thankful. After that, many participants impressed us on their wonderful performances. They expressed their love and appreciations to their parents, teachers and people who love them. I learned a lot of from this activity. There are many people around us who have helped us great. We should be grateful to them in return for which they have done for us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ralph,

    I'm a newcomer here who comes of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I felt unhappy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talk to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger right away. I am trying to improve the situation and it doesn't seem to work. Can you tell me something which I should do it?

Yours

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I like travelling and my dream of visiting Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during the National Day holidays this year. My mother booked an one-day tour for me. On the morning of October 1st I went to Tian'anmen Square with one of my classmates, there we watched the flag-raising ceremony. As I watched the flag rising slowly, I sang the national anthem, feeling extreme proud. Several hours later, a grand military parade was held mark the People's Republic of China's 70th founding anniversary. In the afternoon we decided to go to other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. When we reached the destination, it was crowded with tourists. I was glad for which those volunteers had done for little kids and elderly people. Standing on the Great wall, we couldn't help admire the splendid scenery. This travelling, with doubt, meant a lot of to me.